|Reviews for Fifinella|
| OCMichael chapter 16 . 6/9
I am thoroughly enjoying this story; I hope that you will decide to continue it...
| kahless21 chapter 16 . 3/11/2012
still waiting for an update. keep up the good work.
| StargateWatcher chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
nice job deciding to use the Aryans in ur story; I saw a discussion on this newely Stargate-ized culture on
am impressed u know about Five-Star-General Hap Arnold
| forestreject chapter 16 . 4/14/2010
does she ever get the hang of it? or go on that date?
| WaveMasterYami chapter 16 . 8/3/2009
Goodness, not only is this story so interesting it can't help but draw you in, it's absolutely hilarious! I absolutely adore Fred's humor and I find Jackie to be so cute! I can't wait for the next update!
| FORD B chapter 16 . 12/2/2008
| archiev chapter 16 . 12/2/2008
Thanks for the update, missed this story.
| HAZMOT chapter 16 . 12/1/2008
I was just thinking about this the other day. Really. hehehe I'm glad you had time to update. My biggest thrill was that Vala or Kara admitted to being royalty, and her daughter had the gene. I knew the IOA eventually would interfere, and there has to reason they want Athens. It's going to be interesting to see what develops between Vala and Jackie. But in the meantime, Teal'c is about to have a rude reunion with his son. If he evers get so SGC, then Jackie is in more danger if Adria ever gets a hold of her. I wonder if Adria has any bearing on Vala too. Fred is a hoot and throwing away the computer was his way of dealing with current technology, not suiting his lifestyle. I'm glad your back Kody. :D
| Eternal Density chapter 16 . 12/1/2008
yay, an update!
I like the issues with computers part. And Jackie being royalty is a good point - those IOA people sure cause a lot of trouble. Poor Woolsey, sent to the freezer known as Athens :P
p.s. you mean "sic the Aryans" not sick, and it's Selmak not Salmak.
| FORD B chapter 15 . 9/13/2008
Very good chapter!
| acer-sigma chapter 15 . 9/10/2008
Can't help but wonder if 'Mitchell' is really that obnoxious, or if he's just putting up an act to annoy the hell out of everyone (especially Daniel). Suffice it to say, Daniel's going to be driven up the wall with both 'Vala' (assuming she doesn't revert to her Kara personality) and 'Mitchell' hanging around.
Kind of surprised Daniel gave in as quickly as he did. Would of thought he would of pressed the issue of Vala's trustworthiess. I'm thinking Jackie's willingness to believe Kara had something to do with it. Still, the revelations must hit him hard, afterall I think if there's one thing he prides himself on, is his ability to read people and look beyond first impressions.
Looking forward to seeing what happens now between Jackie/Fred/Kara now that they're all reunited and the truth about Kara's dissapearance has been revealed.
And interesting bit with Rya'c and Adria. Can't wait to see how everyone reacts when the Ori makes their move on Earth.
| HAZMOT chapter 15 . 9/10/2008
Fred certainly is a visionary in wanting Kara dead, with Daniel leading the way to an airel death. But I love this meeting between Vala and Jackie. Carlos certainly pulled a surprise on Vala, but why would he reveal who Vala really was? After explaining to Jackie she really is royalty and it's very dangerous to reveal such information, I hope she becomes more bonded to Vala as a daughter. It was fun to see Daniel practically pee in his pants at the revelation he was amongst royalty. hehehehe. Anywho, now Adria is back in the picture and using Ryac. I hope Jackie has enough abiities to escape her clutches as well as Teal'c. I have a feeling it's about to get nasty between old Adria and Jackie. Even more so at Vala's protectiveness. I just hope Carlos is not a spy. :D
| Deleted67545 chapter 15 . 9/9/2008
Bad idea, Rya'c! Bad idea...
"Vala"'s reaction was priceless!
| archiev chapter 15 . 9/9/2008
Thanks for the update.
| Eternal Density chapter 15 . 9/9/2008
It's been a while, but this was worth the wait. Quite a confrontation!