|Reviews for Claiming Hermione|
| Wense chapter 33 . 3/3
Ok, I just red the complete fanfic and I have to say... OH MY FUCKING GOSH, THIS IS BLOODY FUCKING AWESOME! Poor Draco that lost his parents. Maybe you abandoned this fanfic, but if you read this review, PLZ, CONTINUE! I WANT TO READ WHEN THEY CONFESS THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER! You really are a good writer, plz continue, make another chapter. You are one of the best lemon writer that I ve red. If you need any ideas for future chapters, just tell me, I ll try to help :)
| TheAntelopicNatureGirl.Says U chapter 33 . 3/1
Oh darling this is so incredibly well written. How did I even find this? Your characters are so in character it's insane. And your smut is realistic and not just one big one-off with insane unrealistic dom scenes. The whole world is realistic and fitting in with everything we know, and there aren't any conveniently made-up spells to suit your needs. It's bloody brilliant. Gorgeous writing. Very, very unusually good writing. And how you managed to flesh out side characters and not make it all focused on the end result and smuttiness, it's brilliant. Thanks. And update soon! If you were ever intending to. Much love.
| Serenity20251 chapter 33 . 2/27
Really Really Great Story I was Delighted when I read It really well written good plot and really great smut chapter I hope you update soon I can't wait to see the next chapter
| Cartography chapter 33 . 2/21
Such a well written fic, I'm so sad to see that it was updated so long ago... You've done such a good job here with character and writing UGH I wish there was more! Hope you're still writing, wherever you are and whatever you're doing, even if it's not this!
| erinholly.brown chapter 33 . 2/20
PLEASE WRITE MORE IM DYING WITHOUT IT
| blablub chapter 33 . 2/18
Not just for this chapter, for the whole thing...
It's not the only fantastic piece of fanfiction, but it's the only one I've found that isn't a fantastic, humorous one-shot, but actually close-to-novel-sized, managing to keep everyone feasibly in-character while still developing these characters, providing a feasible alternative timeline (I guess Dumbledore didn't put Marvolo's ring on, and Voldemort went with a more direct method of exacting revenge on the Malfoys that throwing Draco into the meatgrinder), having an erotica aspect without it becoming stifflingly dominant, rather nicely mixing it up not just with the preceding romance, but also with in-universe developments.
Even really minor characters - Pansy, Daphne - are decently portrayed, and Draco's social environment significantly influencing the course of events rather than just being there is very well done.
In short, the best HP fiction I'm aware of. I did, admittedly, find it entirely by accident, and it wasn't what I actually looked for - but I still went through all 33 chapters over a single, long night, couldn't stop.
The only teensy - really teensy - criticism I've is that by chapter 33, the actual erotica sections are becoming rather repetitive. Didn't stop my enjoyment, though, even if they are, relative to the romance and the order-business background, the 'Weakest' part of it (Note: I found the first two, Hermione's first time and the shenanigans in the floors, to be significantly superior to what followed). But being the weakest part of such a fantastic piece of fanfiction isn't exactly a condemnation.
| Apotter118 chapter 33 . 2/9
Hello, I doubt you will update anytime soon but I'm hoping one day you would. I absolutely love it! I wasn't really sure if is ever be a DHr shipper but this story made me fall in love with the idea! So if you don't want to Finnish for any reason I do hope to see some new work from you soon!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/2
I haven't read the books yet but I love Rowling's magic-saga, pretty much enjoyed the movies and also have a crush on its fan-fictions. Can somebody correct me but isn't Emma Watson 5'5"? How tall is supposed to be Hermione in the book? I say this because you wrote down in your story that she's 5 feet tall. That's too tiny and I never picture HERMIONE that small. Anyway, I am enjoying your story despite this tiny fact. Cheers! :-)
| nathalie.goos chapter 33 . 1/30
oh my god, do you even get back to this story? you HAVE to finish it! I love it, the way the loves her, and her body... the way he wants to please her first, omg! please you have to update/finish this!
love your work, so detailed.
| xoxo22595 chapter 33 . 1/7
Wow. Amazing. Really really wonderful.
I hope you update soon because I neeeeed to know what happens. You have sucked me in and now I need to know.
Really incredible, realistic writing.
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/4
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/4
the worst evry fuck!¡
| candy chapter 33 . 1/4
i love this chapter I love this story cant wait for the next chapter keep writing please because I want to keep reading
| more sarcasm chapter 33 . 12/28/2013
I love this story! Are you going to update soon?
| Kitivi chapter 33 . 12/26/2013
It's been a year and a half since this has been updated, so I'm not holding my breath but I really hope you come back and finish it. I seldom read WIP for this reason. It's a wonderful story and well written and sucked me in from the beginning.