Reviews for Harry Potter: Chosen One
Anora Blaze Trueheart chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
I really like your story, the twins so sneeky.
I am cool with slighty spaced out updates lord knows I do that sometimes just don't forget this story it's very good.
I think it would be cool if the Weasley twins found out that Hayden and Harry are twins and help them out alittle.
emeraldeyed chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
Huzzah for updates
Keeper of Storms chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
I'm sorry, but did Amos just say that he would rather his child die than attempt to protect him? Would rather have his friends killed and other son brainwashed because he would not try? Because I am fairly certain that is what he just said. Any and all respect I had for him, and Anna, just vanished. Well done.
RRW chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
you have to be the only author who explain why those people who were petrified stayed that way for the whole school year.
Madkatt chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
Yay! I really love the interaction between Harry and Hayden. Keep up the good work :)
theoncomingwind chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
I can't believe I'm saying this, but I like that you had Harry call Lily and James 'mum' and 'dad' there at the end.

I'm curious, are they going to twin-talk at Hogwarts? I'd think, after their little episode, that they'd find it difficult not to. Who will find out who they are first? Personally, I'm rooting for Fred and George. It seems fitting, that twins would be the first to recognize other twins.

Anyway, I'm really glad you updated and I'm looking forward to the next one.

-KL
valleydew chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
So glad you are back. Lovely chapter
RebeccaRoy chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
Wow, Dumbledore needs to die, he is quite evil here.
SpanaHana chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
woo you updated :D amazing chapter, I really liked the part where James was explaining what happened :) can't wait for next update :)
Impstar chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
I hope that your next update comes within the next 6 months... though even that would be somewhat ridiculous.

Not bad though, I'm eager to find out of the mystery of the chamber will be solved.
Lucy-Erza-Hearthfilia chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
wow please update quick i love it
Mystolon chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
Didn't enjoy this chapter some issues confused me i'm going to have to go back and reread the story

The whole BWL issue is a complete mess and what was stated in this chapter makes no sense Hayden's scar was caused by rubble and contains nothing other than ambient magic

then how can he speak to snakes Harry in canon was able to speak to snakes because his scar contained the Horux when Voldermort marked him as his equal

It just doesn't add up at all and confuses me i really don't like that i feel like i'm missing something

The Potters reasoning is quite simply a little flimsy it seemed to be an attempt to provide reasoning to their actions and it doesn't work because they had better options than neglecting Harry In short i'm going to hold out on forgiving them intill i see more behaviour that shows they deserve forgiving but it was a very good start to bringing the potter family togther i will look forward to their future interactions

If they where telling the truth in this chapter they should be forgiven to a degree but i doubt Harry would realisticly be able to forgive them completly
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
i loved loved was great.i can't wait for more.
DeepAndSoulful chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
I am giving you virtual hugs right now. I am so happy you updated! And it was long too! Bless you.
Wolfjackle chapter 20 . 11/9/2012
Update! I basically forgot about this story. Thanks for the chapter, it was fun, and I liked hearing about the Potter's side of the story.
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