|Reviews for Harry Potter: Chosen One|
| ejm12 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
This is a great story! to answer your questions:
1-please no slash, brothers definetly
2-I think Harry should be in gryffindor, and still be friends with ron and hermione. And he should live with the weasleys so he doesn't have to go back to the dursleys.
3-Hayden should be a hufflepuff, and shock the wizarding world. He could be friends with ernie, hannah, susan, and justin.
| wolfawaken chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
I think with Sirius and Remus they are more like brothers, Due to them not being in touch of each. Just like brothers and sisters do, you slowly lose touch of each other as life goes on. Then it is that your and your brothers, sisters is back together either by fate or reunion. You can also do slash it fits as well. Harry should be Ravenclaw and Hayden should be Gryffindor.
| fred2008 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
first: i'd say a brotherly friendship, but having to rebuild from the start.
second: harry should either be hufflepuff, ravenclaw, and to a small degree gryffindor...though more ravenclaw, i don't see him with much cunning
third: gryffindor mostly due to his nature, but he is cunning, such as the twin bond, yet loyale to his brother...but more of a lion really.
fourth...: i'd have to say neville longbottom, granger, and...er..mainly the hufflepuff house, i have more for later though, seeing you weren't specific about which years
cool, keep up the work
| Le Diablo Blanc2 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
would be nice to see harry in ravenclaw most of the people there are not used in fics. but basically any house that doesnt have Ron,Hermione or Ginny in it would be good(god i hate those 3)
plus he would get to meet luna in year 2 i love her as a character
please dont hook him up with cho,but i would like to see him as afriend of Cedric's
I guess there is no chance to hook him up with marietta,but I always enjoy him with Luna
Or maybe with someone from slytherin
I would love to see Harry and his brother in the same house even if its Huffle puff which does have a lot of good characters in.
its unusual to read about harry and his brother getting along and cannot wait until the next chapter
| fifespice chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
i thikn harry should maybe be a ravenclaw as hes iintelligent or perhaps a slytherin and hope he can geta guardian would eb so funny if hayden ende up as a slytherin would serve his pretentious parents right
| xXShadowThornXx chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
Whatever happens I think in some way Hayden and Harry should be in the same house. I think Sirius and Remus should become good friends 'cuz that would really piss off the Potters. You should do new characters for Harry's freinds, and I think that Hayden and Harry should be freind with Fred and George.
| ellaevans12 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
In answer to your questions, they should be friends that are like brothers who possibly could have had something more but they were both to scared to say anything, harry should be in Gryffindor and hayden should either be in Gryffindor or Hufflepuff but i think the twins should be together finally. Ron and Hermoine should definitely be included, it seems like your already going to do Snape. It would be interesting to see the draco dynamic, especially towards harry since he's completely different then the book.
| fifespice chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
least haydens nice adn im guesisng olivander adn the goblins maybe sensed the truth about harry being the actual boy who lived huh
and i hope harry gets a proper guardian and doenst have to go back to the durslesy nasty people
| Litara chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
This is a great story. I hope you update it again quickly. I think that Remus and Sirius should have a Brother-like friendship. (Perhaps similar to the friendship that Sirius and James used to share.)
I think that Harry should be in Griffindor. He does have Courage its just buried deep. I know in this story he seems to be acting more like a Hufflepuff but he Kind of reminds me alot of Neville Longbottom (well except for the fact that he has much more magical talent) Neville didn't think he had courage and he ended up being a true Griffindor. Plus Harry may ask the hat to put him in Griffindor anyway since the two adults that are like parents to him (McGonagall & Remus) are Griffindors.
I also think that Hayden should go to Griffindor because
A.) He doesnt seem very Hufflepuffish especially if he's supposed to act alot like James.
B.)He's very loyal to harry and sticks up for him. So if Harry were a Griffindor he'd probably want to be in the same house as his Twin
C.) I just can't see Hayden as a Slytherin. Both his parents were in Griffindor. He probably grew up hating the house. He probably wouldnt make any friends in Slytherin (being the supposed Boy Who Lived and all). His Parents and the rest of the wizarding world would be Shocked if their Hero was sorted into Slytherin. (actually that might be an interesting plot twist... oh well I still can't see Hayden as a good Slytherin)
I also hope that Harry somehow meets Ron and Hermione and the rest of the Weasleys in this story/. I mean if he does then he could stay with them after the school year ends. I also think that maybe later on in his school years he could fall in love with Ginny. and maybe Hayden could have a crush on someone from one of the other Houses.
Update soon I really enjoy reading this story
| fifespice chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
poor harry so hayden knows ehs the boy who lived but his aprnest abandoned him and ahrry is abused least eh and hayden still have their mental link though
| LeprechaunJV chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
Cool! McGonagal, Remus & Sirius (along with Hayden's knowledge) should join forces and resources and arrange for the care of Harry so as not to be sent back to the Dursleys. Also he needs them as parental figures as opposed to the neglect received from the Potters (Lily & James) and Dumbledore.
Hope you decide to make Snape a decent character who is good with Harry (at least).
Look forward to your next update.
| oxymoron8 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
1. Remus and Sirius should be brothers, and Sirius should have abandoment issues with Remus. Not instant forgiveness
2. Harry should be a Ravenclaw or Slytherin.
3. Hayden should be a hufflepuff. He's really loyal to Harry.
4. Maybe Padma Patil, Draco Malfoy, and some older students. No Hermione she's too bossy in the books to me and Ron holds him back. Hmm what do you think about Harry and Pansy?
Great chapter. I really like that Minerva is taking an intrest in helping Harry. Why not have them go to St. Mungos for test to see if they can help him get healthier(sp) faster. I like your explanation for their bond. Happy writing.
| alwaysariyana chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
Very decent work there, I liked it a lot. I always love these kinds of stories :)
| dvdeath123 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
i think and this is just personally me but they should both be in the same house because they have been apart so long they deserve to be together but i guess its ur desicion soo yea
| DeliaDee chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
Great chapter. Nice and happy which Harry certainly deserves. As for your questions, I veer toward Remus and Sirius being "brothers" but slash would be fine if it's done well. I'm still thinking on what house Harry would be in but, quite frankly, Hayden is extremely Slytherin. Very cunning and sly - he would have to be in order to remain so close to Harry despite the years, the distance, and their parents. Also, his pranks are very effective but are shaped so that, unless you knew better, you wouldn't ever guess that they are pranks. All in all, a very Slytherin kind of guy is our Hayden. Really nice work.