Reviews for First Steps
Potterworm chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
“Daddy, I didn’t start the conversation with the stranger; mom has always told me not to. He came to me.”

Haha, that guy's probably like, aw crap, run. Great line.
ProFfeSseR chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Great story! It would've been nice if they'd gotten together at the beginning of the show. Would have saved us a lot of trouble because there were so many signs between them.

Very much like your version of the pilot! Just one little detail, how can she touch him through his flannel, when he's still wearing the cotton dress shirt? Little slip :D But other than that, perfect!
chants chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
That was really awesome. I loved it. Thank you.
Copop chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Very sweet and so cute!

Loved the accidental kiss and how they handled it.

Thanks for writing :)
Sarah chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Perfect! "His girls"! So sweet! I love this story!
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
good story