Reviews for Checkmate
tina.rockabilly chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
I laughed out loud :D But also I'd love to read a sequel with Lucius :)
sailor super-starS chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Lol I loved this! XD
OspreyEmblem chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Oh my gosh, I love this.
Alt3etf chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
RousseFille chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
That was HOT!

Love it!
TheGrimmChaos chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Could you ,please,make a squeal to this?
beaabop chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! *put tent up outside authors house with pitchforks and fires efectively trapping said author until the SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! is written.* Awesome story! Loved it!
Seyfert chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Great ficlet!

Naughty Hermione... Lucky, naughty Hermione... :D
tenoh27 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
LOL... such a devious Severus...:). Lucky Hermione. Thank you!
Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Lost O'Fallon Girl chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Oh jeeze! You made me laugh and you made me think about Severus Lucius and Hermione...what an interesting thought. LOL

Lost O'Fallon Girl.
WishIHadAnAngel chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
I just couldn't stop giggle at this story. and that last remark from Severus just made me laugh out loud. Seriously of all the things you could have come up with you choosed Lucius? Not that I don't think him as hot but you could have done better you know.. xD
Jessarie chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
no offense but... BAD MENTAL IMAGE!

i was okay until the last sentance, anyone but him i would have been fine.

otherwise, GREAT STORY!
Hale chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Adonis chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Haha, great job!
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