I thought the other Cullen "Kids" had headed to Alaska, makes sense that they would be back for the funeral, but just something that doesn't quite flow.
After the whole George thing when Bella and Edward go hunting he thinks about her eyes as going back to their beautiful brown. I thought they had fully changed to golden or topaz like the rest of the Cullens.
When they get back Alice tells Edward to pack up all their stuff. Thought she had done that for them before they left the first time.

Again I have to ask how did Edward's Volvo get down from Alaska. I mean its coming in handy now.

Just a continuity issue, if after the wedding Bella states "... we put Jacob and Olivia into the limo and then got into our own with the boys ..."
How does Bella then tell Olivia (with her human hearing and all) that she liked her vows from a different limo?

So how is Edward working on his Volvo when he did not bring it down from Alaska?

This definitely needs more chapters there is so much that can be done

i think u should make a sequal called the start of eternity

also i have an idea in the next story they should have it were a new vampire moves into town like tanya :D

ur the most awsome writer in the world

i luv ur work u should be a author

im not that far yet so i dont know if this happens but anyway u should make an episode were they adopt like esme

ok its complete i have eternity madness it were u fall in love with ur stories points to u heheh i am ur number one fan

OMG! please please please write another one! i have just finished the last chapter and feel so sad! :-( ii really want to read further in to there life! and possibly what happens with that alyssa coz she is in alaska but now tied to forks because of her cousin and Jacob!... pleaseee lol i really enjoyed it and now i have no idea what to read or do in general! i just keep thinking about whats going to happen next! pleaseee :-)))

Hi, i havent ready this sequel yet but i definately think you should do more! i finished the first one last night so this is todays reading material. i am sure it will be as good as the first so pleaseeeee do a third lol, thanks, i will review again once i have read it xxxx

I think you should continue the story, I like it.
And I think that you should keep Jacob & Olivia in the story as well.

plz update!

Please continue