Reviews for During an Eternity
emmett chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
i loved it! the dancer. lol please update soon, and make chapters this long thanks:D
Psychic-Porsche-3 chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I loved the prank Jasper and Emmet pulled! That was amazing! Great chapter! Guessing Girl says that Emmet and Jasper will play a prank on Edward right before they leave for school and they became late for the plane!
EmmaLouise1994 chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
awesome chapter, I can't wait for the wedding
Sarkule chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
good chapter :D

tho you need to add a bit of action into it i think!
Lara201322 chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
I really love your Bella and Edward. There perfect. Even jacob and alica and rose are really good. you kept them the same which makes this story even better. Keep Writing :D thanks..
mandyy chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
woow ur stories r soo good, i had the read the cchapter twice!

keep on sending the chapters thanx:]
4everbellaxedward chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
hey great work

but none of your links work for davidsbridal and some others on your page just so you know;)
Phantom-writer3739 chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
i wonder what edward was doing while bella was being molested by conga dancers?

a great chapter by the way. i agree, teal looks amazing on pale skin.
Geeky13 chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
LOVE LOVE LOVE (is a dangerous drug).
Abbs chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
This story is amazing! Keep it up!
Frenzy In Delirium chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
Loved this chapter and the story. Cant wait for the next chapter.
meow114 chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
nice i like how bella just put him to sleep :P
10000trees chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
:D more please

this was good! :)
DanielWhite chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
excellent chapter
KBeth chapter 24 . 1/27/2009
aw cute chapter!

i loved it of course :)

warren was pretty hilarious and what bella did to the persistent male dancer was priceless.

can't wait for the next chapter!
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