Reviews for During an Eternity |
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![]() ![]() i loved it! the dancer. lol please update soon, and make chapters this long thanks:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the prank Jasper and Emmet pulled! That was amazing! Great chapter! Guessing Girl says that Emmet and Jasper will play a prank on Edward right before they leave for school and they became late for the plane! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter, I can't wait for the wedding |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter :D tho you need to add a bit of action into it i think! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your Bella and Edward. There perfect. Even jacob and alica and rose are really good. you kept them the same which makes this story even better. Keep Writing :D thanks.. |
![]() ![]() woow ur stories r soo good, i had the read the cchapter twice! keep on sending the chapters thanx:] |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great work but none of your links work for davidsbridal and some others on your page just so you know;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wonder what edward was doing while bella was being molested by conga dancers? a great chapter by the way. i agree, teal looks amazing on pale skin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE LOVE LOVE (is a dangerous drug). |
![]() ![]() This story is amazing! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this chapter and the story. Cant wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice i like how bella just put him to sleep :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D more please this was good! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw cute chapter! i loved it of course :) warren was pretty hilarious and what bella did to the persistent male dancer was priceless. can't wait for the next chapter! |