|Reviews for The Exile's Homecoming|
| jaselp00 chapter 1 . 2/23
Nice. Not a lot of excessive detail, which can be a good thing. If you wanted to, this could be used as the starting base for a more detailed/longer story. Especially for when his past comes back to haunt them.
Regardless, nice little story.
| love KNS chapter 1 . 1/21
I wish you could write more(sad)
| LOVE KNS chapter 1 . 1/20
YOU WRITE GOOD KNS FANFICS PLEASE CONTINUE!PRETTY PLEASE
| SoundlessWorld chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
That last sentence put my mind in the gutters. Argh. *giggles* I like the one-shot though, I wonder what would Ren say about this happening. Hmmm...
| How're you doing chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
This was really good! :) But Ayano is 17 in the anime, I don't really know about the manga... :3
| KNSAnimeFreak chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Continue the story... its really interesting...
| Lovely chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I have been reading your stories about Ayano and Kazuma and you have them so spot on! I love it! Would you plz do a longer version of this story i know it has been awhile but it is just so good! 3
| mgaa chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
oh wow i love this..
| awriterofstories chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Nice, but you got the age difference wrong. Ayano is seventeen when the series started, and Kazuma is twenty-one. So it's a four year difference. But other than that, I liked it.
| Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
| DragonHalf chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
| muhcelle chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
That was absolutely amazing. I love the dynamics between them, and I would love it if you were to continue on with this story. Please consider doing so. Your fans and I would love it!
| Imashitowareto chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
i'm really hope that it can be has next chapter!
| animelover931 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
That was nice and very creative plz more im begging u
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 10/5/2011