|Reviews for The Missing Hokage|
| marquis.shax chapter 26 . 8/15
mind telling me how you planned on possibly setting things for the rest of the story as I'm curious as to what you were thinking for this story before you quit it that is if you remember. As I said I'm very curious to how you would've continued such as things with the Kyubi, Konoha and the Akatsuki
| marquis.shax chapter 19 . 8/15
you're both right and wrong about the Pedo. He DID go after Itachi but he underestimated him and lost his hand an then he did the same thing in underestimating Sasuke and got hit with a genjutsu an had his soul or w/e trapped within Sasuke or the curse seal (not sure how exactly that worked). As for Nagato being subordinate to the Sharingan using Obidara that's only because Obidara was the one to bring up the idea an Nagato was easy to manipulate as honestly if a person is smart an knows how to properly use the Rinnegan they could probably defeat any sharingan user especially Obidara as that Kamui would most likely be negated by the Preta Path absorbing the chakra used to make the person intangible and if you're not caught off guard you can negate genjutsu as well with the Rinnegan. Rinnesharingan though would be the ultimate hack as it's the original combined form of both dojutsu lol. I have no complaints with how you took out Tsunade as even Jiraiya would probably get caught like that if you hear someone say your name turn around an come eye to eye with a sharingan
| marquis.shax chapter 5 . 8/14
lmao Sai against anybody in that group is certain suicide and with Tsunade they won't find anything but some blood smears and bone fragments of what USED to be Sai
| marquis.shax chapter 2 . 8/14
only the last few chapters? I'm pretty sure that Kishimoto was in love with Sasuke and anything Uchiha related for almost the full 700 chapters lol. Don't got a clue if you're still active on this site since it's been 7 years since you last update this story but I'm gonna ask anyways in case you are active an just don't care about this story anymore. Do you plan on having that lazy ass bastard Kakashi be for or against Naruto? I honestly feel that Kakashi was in love with Sasuke an became jealous when he left for the Pedophile lol
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/4
You should finish this still..
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/4
You should still try and finish this though...
| abbysbazil chapter 20 . 9/24/2017
Very good story. I eas fisappointed that Team Hokage went down so easily to Itachi and Kisame, primarily because it made all their training and experience erroneous.
I find that sometimes, forcing a story down tbe path you want can negate some of the more reasonal beliefs. Like Tsunade isnt a total idiot that shed forget a group of s class missing nin are after Naruto. Im not saying you dont have your reasons but to me it feels pretty lackluster.
Everything else is cool. Unless you're going to transfer the other half of kyuubi chakra into Naruko, making her real... its your syory and my thoughts dont matter, but ill just say, im not really feeling that move... if it happens.
| soggy noodle chapter 26 . 5/10/2017
Curse all things shiny and new, capricious muses and sudden lack of time for projected creativity!
Another enthralling fanfiction purposefully left incomplete and its readers wondering how the story it told would have played out.
| troyguffey chapter 26 . 1/29/2017
It's such a shame this story is dead. It's one of the best.
| The 6 King chapter 5 . 12/29/2016
why are you making such big deal out of the transformation technique. Enma can do it, kiba can do it. Im fairly certain that others can as well.
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/25/2016
"phase her" faze
"unexploded ordinance" ordnance
"transport them securely and discretely" discreetly
Narutippyverse. Love all the seal engineering.
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/24/2016
"sheered off " sheared
"As the monarchy " monarch
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/24/2016
" free reign" rein
"en mass" masse
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/23/2016
"lightening struck" lightning
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/23/2016
"realator" realtor (multiple times)