|Reviews for It Wasn't His Fault|
| TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
| yours et cetera chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Hey-just want to point out that your summary's repeated use of the d-word may not be in keeping with the guidelines... I believe they say something about keeping all summaries at a K-rating. To be fair I am not going to report your story immediately, but I thought I'd like to point this out-some people may not appreciate this, so you might want to give it some consideration.
Since I should say something on the actual story (so as to keep from annoying you to death and cluttering up your story's reviews), while I do not particularly condone or appreciate Peter/Edmund pairings, I will heartily affirm that you are an excellent writer with a riveting style. I should keep writing if I were you.
| sounder chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
this was real touching and beautiful. and somehow it felt so real... :,