Reviews for Vision Unexpected
FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
very good chapter :)
Jennifer chapter 3 . 3/26/2014
More chapters please
lightningdagger chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
Please continue
Purplecandycat chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Very interesting,please continue it
Myrddin Ignis Magus THE FINAL chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
warpedsolutions chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
I really enjoyed getting both point of views and the way it was seperated. it made it easier to understand for sure. loved it. the story, the characterization, structure..everything. i hope, even though its been a couple of years, that you pick it up again. i could beg and grovel if thats what you need :) thanks for writing this.
Mechconstrictor chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
Any chance of reading any more of this story?
mooeymooey chapter 3 . 9/2/2009
Lol, update soon!
minako366 chapter 3 . 8/19/2009
aw more soon please
xXxZellyxXx chapter 3 . 8/19/2009
chap was great, god whole thing was great, update soon, ciao
lovesanime92 chapter 3 . 7/24/2009
I hope that she tells her soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! update really soon1 Can't wait for the alice/bella lemosn and what not!
SoN1stFan chapter 3 . 4/27/2009
So, this is my first comment, EVER on this website. I just found this story today and finished it today. I must say, *shakes head sadly* I'm very disappointed. Not with the story, but with the lack of updates. This story is very very good! But it hasn't been updated since last July! Come on! Are you guys even still working on it? Please tell me you are, because I really love it so far. It feel so much like the actual characters from the book, and I love Belice. So I'm hoping *which probably is just going to waste* that your on a really long hiatus, and will continue this story, sometime VERY SOON. Don't let this story go.
GothicPheonix chapter 3 . 4/10/2009
I love how you portrayed Alice perfectly. I love where this Bellice fanfic is going. can't wait for the next update. XD
Lazielow chapter 3 . 4/10/2009
Great chapter !

Please hurry up with next update.
Team Alice-Bella chapter 3 . 3/7/2009
69 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »