Reviews for Make It Rain
dadby chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Love it!
Pheonix Autumn chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
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The Deep Abyss 345 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
I send you love, P:

The story is so cute and so sexy at the same time. It's great.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Kind of cute.
Aimer Cullen chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
o0, love it!
bouncy 72 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
hahaha if they have sex every time it rains & it rains all the time in forks...yum.

Funny thing I always imagined Edward as a boxer type guy, just cos they seem cooler i guess. But if you think about it briefs make more sense, you don't have everything shifting around as much. LOL

anyway great oneshot :)
Anna Cullen Ross chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
lol. eight inches! O.O
loveyouedward chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
"Sleep, my love. My singer, la tua cantante."

Sleep, my love. My singer, your singer.

Sleep, my love. My singer, la mia cantante.

Sleep, my love. My singer, my singer.
christie chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
It was mediocre, it lacked alot of detail. I would give it 3 of 5 stars.
volturi chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
it was really good and i love the last line except for one tiny problem... when aro calls bella 'la tua cantante' he is talking to edward saying 'your singer', if edward were talking to bella he would say 'mia cantante'
Blue-Winter-Angel chapter 1 . 10/8/2008

Well done!

If I had Edward do that to me every time it rained? I would be hoping for rainy weather every day. D

Anyway. Great job!
dazzled01218 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008


i like that better than "lemon"

lemons make me gag

chocolate covered strawberries are just orgasmic..

hence why "lemon" should be changed to "chocolate covered strawberry"


k im done explaining that now.

that rain pic of them..


i could so lick every wet(& dry..) inch of Rob in that photo

lol D

hmm. i think i like rain now!
LeightonAliceAphrodite chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
let me break it down for you:

~ a hammock seems rather uncomfortable...never had sex in a hammock though so idk. It does seem pretty erotic though, (in a good way)

~ I also always pictured E in boxers...huh...never thought of him being of briefs guy...loved that part...funny.

~ "Eight inches" was hilarious! Love that.

~“Well, unless you plan on having sex… every time it rains… then I’m still going to hate it." “We can arrange that, I think.” LOVE THAT TOO!

~and i love the end quote. adorable. and soo soo sweet.

out of 100 points u get...100!
Mrs.IsabellaSwanCullen chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Loved it!
Abbadizzle chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Woo! *clap clap clap*
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