|Reviews for Boys|
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/5
| Kaxian chapter 26 . 1/13
You left me heart broken. This is the best SoRiku fanfic I have ever read for many reasons. These characters aren't even yours,but you OWNED them. You made them yours. At some point, I forgot this was a KH fanfic, I could change their names and still fall in love with the story. I identified with Riku (which is not even your original character!) Although not for the same reasons. You had me hooked to this story. In fact, as I'm writing this in my College's lobby, I'm fighting off sleep, because I didn't sleep a damn thing trying to finish this fic up. I sympathized with the characters. And this fic had so many memorable moments. Roxas crying. Riku's family. That epic fight in the bathroom (Sora's a gangsta) and...really. Everything about this fic is perfect. I was gasping, laughing, confused, annoyed...it got all kind of reactions from me.
"PDA no way!"
"Get a room!"
Oh, stfu. LOL.
But, what I liked the most about your fic is that it actually says a true story (most likely, anyway.) People are being more acceptable (or at least decide to leave it alone) about the gay community these days. Many teenagers have gone through what Riku went. And that discrimination infuriates me.
And finally, I am genuinely happy for Sora and Riku ') I was a little disappointed that we didn't get to see much of them in action. But in the other hand, it leaves more to the imagination, whohoho! I was like, so fangirling over that Riku and Roxas kiss. Somehow, I didn't see that as betrayal. I really don't have the brains to go into a discussion on that matter. Someday, when I re-read that fanfic, I'll come up with a coherent reason. But I can't now. I'm currently picking up the pieces of my shattered heart.
...why? Well, I got this awful pang in my chest as I read the last two lines of the last chapter. I got so attached to the story and its characters (which I remind you, aren't yours, but you still OWNED them), just thinking about not getting to know more about their lives after high school leaves me with a longing feeling and ache. The ladybugs, skateboards, smooching, safe pins...*sighs*
Well, looks like it's up to my imagination now...and in 2013, when they're past their 30's, Sora and Riku will get married (just like Haru insisted) because same sex marriage will be legal then! Rejoice!
| Animeblossom chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
I still can't get over how down to earth this story can get. That's a great skill you have and you really aspire me to write like this someday. Keep on writing! And happy holidays!
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/23/2013
It's a shame such a wonderful LONG story was ruined in the very last chapter by one complete and total unnecessary moment. I don't know why you had Riku and Roxas kissing out of nowhere but like the reviewer said below it was in fact a betrayal.
| Dexsin chapter 24 . 10/10/2013
I really enjoyed this entire story, and I can't say I have any problems with it...except the part where Riku Kisses Roxas. My reaction to reading that is as follows, "Lolwhut?". I understand that they COULD have had a "thing", but that doesn't mean there is really anything between them. To me, it just felt like a betrayal, on both of their parts, to Sora for no good reason. I like to just pretend that didn't happen. But aside from that, and maybe I'm the only one who disliked that and was confused by it, I enjoyed this story immensely and it was very well written.
| Mimi the Brave chapter 26 . 9/15/2013
Oh God, the ending was perfect.. I feel like crying, this fic has felt like highschool times again, only with more fun and more skateboarding. Thanks for this awesome story... You rock!
| Mimi the Brave chapter 19 . 9/12/2013
"They were on a date. So, that meant he should-no, wait. Roxas paid the check, that meant he was the guy. So what did girls do on dates?
Wait, that was fucking stupid. He wasn't a girl."
somehow that cracked me up so bad xDD I love your version of Akuroku!
| Mimi the Brave chapter 4 . 9/11/2013
Rikus Family IS nuts, and I do too really love them, really do! I'll just keep reading now, this is great.
| Mimi the Brave chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
"Intentions towards one of their one", that is the greatest way of saying it, seriously! And I loved the opening paragraph!
| Jirachibi chapter 26 . 8/27/2013
This is a great story I read a while ago. It has a fantastic plot, and the characters stay on the correct path and don't deter onto the OOC platform. I struggle to find a FanFiction as good as this, and it had provided me with amusement for a long while. Thank you for writing this story, and I look forward to reading more of yours soon.
| Wolfheart4 chapter 26 . 8/25/2013
I have one word to describe how much I enjoyed reading this story:
| dracoXK chapter 26 . 8/16/2013
I finally remembered my log in! Rainbowyuki on tumblr mentioned this story and I'm so glad she did. I LOVED it so much. Your writing is wonderful and really brought me back to he 90's.
Thank you, thank you thank you. It was beautiful and well written and I loved the conflicts.
It was beautiful
| Animeblossom chapter 13 . 8/15/2013
The plot is amazingly deep and has so much depth. I never expected that Sora could have such a contrast backstory and still...be in character? It's hard to explain because your story is a trip. Can't wait to read the rest! 3
| deletedmyaccountgotnewone chapter 26 . 8/10/2013
I'm struggling to find a single story similar to this in any way. I only found one over a week of constant scrolling through Soriku archives. Well done, keep up the good work! x
| WordSailing chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
I loved it! It was a really awesome story, ya know? Like, seriously, because I learned a few things along the way! Like that "PDA no way!" I had no idea what that was about, so I looked it up and then I was like LOL all the time I read it. And the thing Riku said to Sora about ownership, and Roxas' talk about what's fake and what's real... and other things. Awesome. AND The pairings were awesome,too. And I loved Axel. And the ladybugs. Really, its like I only have good things to say about your fic. Your writting's awesome, too, by the way. The narration's pretty entertaining, you see, I loved it. :)