EEEEEEEEPPPPPP! OMG THAT WAS SO HOT! I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! I know I've said this so many times but you're so good at describing emotions and sensation! I love how you have their thoughts portrayed when they're in the moment. And the part where Sora said he didnt want to be the girl made me laugh. It was also hilarious when Riku's mom was teasing him bahaha. So awk! But the Roxas and Axel part was sad... i wish Roxas would be more open out who he is. But I think it makes sense because this story takes place in the 90s and even now there are so many people still in the closet. Btw, i really like how the setting is 1995. it's something unique and different. It adds something special and interesting to the story

A negative sound...what an interesting concept. I really don't know how you come up with this stuff. You're such an amazing writer, I cant' even begin to tell you...

I realized something about this story. It makes me happy when I read it. Like when Roxas silently told Sora that he made his day, I couldn't help but smile. There are so many scenes in this story that just make me feel good. And I think it's really rare for a story to make you feel that way

Wow. That's the first thing that popped in my head this chapter. This was brilliantly written. Sora's thoughts and words were so profound. I knew there was something truly meaningful about this story from the very beginning. The message of this chapter was extremely powerful and perfectly executed. i was a bit confused on what Sora meant when he was talking to Roxas and then I thought maybe he was going to tell Riku that he loved him. However, I did not expect Sora to kiss him in front of the whole student body! Like wow, that sure took a lot of guts. And I love how the scene was relayed in a way like it was in the past. And the parallelism on they were broken up was just like how the fight was broken up earlier. The subtle things in this story make such a big difference. I love the whole concept of Ownership and Fake. It's something that I really have to sit back and think about. A book is a great book if you feel different after reading it. I already feel different.

AWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SO CUTE! Even though this story is mainly RIku x Roxas, I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I love the development and progression of their relationship. It's really adorable of how observant Axel was to what Roxas liked. And he even wrote it down! haahaha. Oh my gosh, I cringed though when Roxas's dad walked in. How embarassing! But the I love you part was like so friggin sweet. Cuz Roxas is like loud mouth brat but he's so different around Axel...And Axel is like this bad ass tough guy but he's s so sweet to Roxas. I really love how they bring out the best in each other

Awwwww yay for Axel x Roxas! They're cute too but nothing can compare to Riku and Sora. gah I really wanna know the whole entire story of RIku and Rox and the public outing thing! This has been a mystery for so long!

Aw Roxas's dad is nicer than I thought. I should've mentioned this earlier, but I really like Roxas. He's soooo funny and has such an escentric personality

This story just turns me into a pile of gush...there were so man cute scenes in this chapter. Hell, EVERYTHING was cute, let's just leave it at that. I especially love the way that Sora kissed Riku. You are seriously teh BEST at describing kisses! Ughhhh your writing is so, so good.

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I can't believe Sora got stoned! For some reason, your writing and some of the characters' thoughts and actions remind me of Perks of Being a Wallflower. It's a compliment because I really liked that book.
I kinda like high Sora, it's hot when he starts kissing Riku tee hee

I can't believe Roxas had a crush on Riku!

Wowwww his past is finally revealed! I never expected Sora to be so bad. It's pretty scary. The scene with him kissing Cloud's cheek was cute ahaa. I'm surprised that Kairi pretended to be his girlfriend, I didn't think Sora was aware of his sexuality

...Oh. My. God. Okay, this is my favorite chapter by far. I'm at a loss for words for how cute that make out scene was...oh my goshhhhhh it was soooooooooooooooooo well written. The way you described their thoughts, emotions, and sensations were absolutely amazing. They hardly did anything and yet it was so HOT! I can't even imagine what the smut is gonna be like! I'm gonna have a friggin nose bleed haha. And it was really sweet when Riku said that he loved Sora...and I like that Sora wasn't ready to say it back. It seemed appropriate. I really love this story so so so so so so so so much. I am definitely re-reading this chapter sometime cuz it is just that good. I usually skim through stories but I actually read this really slowly just because it's so good and I like to savor the moment

Yay Roxas had Sora's back! And ooooo parts of Sora's mysterioius transfer is being revealed! And Riku holding his hand was sooo cute. THere's always something incredibly adorable in every ch!

This story really does live up to it's genre. Romance/humor. The combination and balance is perfect! It was funny reading Sora and Roxas fighting and then it was sooo cute when RIku and Sora kissed. And omggg Sora wanted to ask Roxas bout sex?! dangggggg omgg

Hahaha I can't believe Roxas walked in on them. The goodbye between Roxas and Riku was adorableeee omggg. Cheesy but so cute! Roxas and Axel are cute too :grin: Omg it was so funny how mad Sora was!

...i died. i just died and went to yaoi heaven. like oh. my. god. i don't like to curse but this was so fucking adorable, sweet,cute, fluffy, every good adjective out there! This has got to be the best description of kissing i've EVER read. like it was just so incredibly sweeet, my stomach was churning! This is one my favorite chapters of all time. omg omg omg i love this story so so so so so so much. So far, this is the second best story i've ever read, and i've read a lot of stories. omg i can't get over how cute this chapter was...i just wanna go back and re-read it. like its just that good. you are so freaking talented. omg