|Reviews for Boys|
| simple charm chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
I "aw"ed at the SoRi scene. And I laughed because they actually managed to find Dan and Jimbo again.
And ouch. Poor Roxas.
| Kioko Yasu chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
Arg! I want to know!What the hell is with Riku and Roxas! And when is Sora going to meet Riku's family? And when is Sora going to make a documentary on his forced observations of the girl-entity?
| Animegoil chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
Ah, so fascinating. You keep stringing us along in breathless suspense as to what their backgrounds are exactly, but it's great _ I love all the little details, the very very natural flow of their conversations, and the light and witty tone of the piece overall. You deal with a good number of themes, fun and quirky characterization, and you keep pulling the plot along nicely, not rushed, but something happens every chapter. I'm loving the character interactions.
| Dunkelmur chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
Gaah, you just made my day. The part with the kiss on the hand was to die for. And I love Sora's dramatic side. Please update soon, I'll be waiting!
| nicoLIES chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
Omg... RIKU! *hugz* nu ... but im glade roxas actully learned somthing. tehe
| Olethia chapter 4 . 8/14/2008
I never, never EVER read Kingdom Hearts school fics. Please let that be known.
But you totally changed that. xD
I am totally in love with your writing style! Your pacing is amazing! And I can't stop fangirling over this fic, seriously. (I'm even convincing a friend to teach me how to make hemp bracelets now. LOL)
I love your portayal of Riku, (and all characters, obviously, but him most notably) and I am definitely in love with his family.
Also, I'm awestruck by your perfect/subtle use of cliffhangers. It's no wonder this is being labelled an addictive substance. xD
| nicoLIES chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
I was just wondering in chapter 4... umm which Bush song was Riku playing 24/7?
| nicoLIES chapter 4 . 8/12/2008
omg this /is/ addicting. my one friend said i should start reading it and its AWESOMESAUCE! i cant waite for the next chapter... and btw... happy akuroku day *couchcoughimalosercoughcough*
| simple charm chapter 4 . 8/11/2008
Roxas! He's so hilarious in this story, for some reason. When are we going to find out about Riku and Roxas' past?
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
| Dunkelmur chapter 4 . 8/10/2008
Heh, Riku didn't seem too happy about Roxas being Sora's roommate. Not that it was unexpected, I'm really curious about why Riku hate Roxas so much. I have a few teories but.. hmm. Hihi, Riku really does have quite a lovely family! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, so please update soon!
| Kitsune Kit chapter 4 . 8/10/2008
Haha Riku's family amuses me.
| Kyuri-sama chapter 3 . 8/5/2008
High schools Aus are not really my thing, but I have to say this time it works and I love it.
Your narrators are likeable, funny and easy to follow without being too simple. Your writing stile flows and is very engaging; the pace of the story feels right and the atmosphere does as well. This fic has a certain feel to it... It really does feel like a high school, not in "wow, mine was just like that!" kind of way (which I could never claim because schools where I come from are really different), but in a "I think I really do get what kind of environment that is" way. I can picture it and it feels real.
The characters are living very different circumstances here than in canon!verse, but I like the way you are taking their personalities with that context twist and making them work. They feel like such boys, they really do, and I adore that.
I could spam you with more rambling, but, bottom line, till now this fic is pretty much made of awesome. I can't wait read what’s next!
| Dunkelmur chapter 3 . 8/5/2008
Perfect! I love all the personalities, the plot and your way of writing. Haha, and I love how much Riku want Sora. Really I have nothing to complain about! Hope you update soon, I'll be waiting.
| Bunch-o-Nuts chapter 3 . 8/4/2008
Cute. Very, very, very cute. I absolutely love how well this chapter was written; it made me grin the entire time I was reading it!
| simple charm chapter 3 . 8/4/2008
I was smiling the whole time I read this chapter. Fantastic writing as always. I loved it.