|Reviews for If Only|
| Sundarii chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
that last line. gahhhhhh my heart broke. GO AFTER HER ZUKO! T_T
| caspasta chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
I LOVE THAT LAST LINE! OH, THE FEELS! 3
| ashes on the ground chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
NO. That was sad. Shit. :
I still like it though. :
| engineergirl86 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
PLEASE write a sequel. I'm hooked on this story line. So cute! and sad
| PutteringPoet chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Oh god no! That last line wounds me.
Really wonderful writing. :)
| Nukumi chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Nicely done! That last line was the perfect way to end it _
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
I'd never thought there would be parallels between Jet/Katara and Mai/Zuko, but you managed to find a few after all. And the last scene... All in all, Very Well Done!
| Midnight4568 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Wow, this is very well-written! I like how you kept the thoughts flowing, and it wasn't hard to keep up.
The end was expected, but also unexpected. When Mai came into the picture, I knew that Katara had written the letter. I like how you made it a tiny little bit Zutara-ish.
| Lilako chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Nooooo! Whhy Katara why? D:
| Fan963 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
CUTE I liked it no wait LOVED IT
| P.O.J.A chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Just can't get enough of your stories! XD
I felt for Katara not being able to help Jet, and not being able to forgive him in the end. It was rather mature and sweet of her to assist Zuko the way she did, and assure him that Mai still cared and loved him no matter what, being each other's first love and what not.
The ending was priceless though! Hand in hand with his first love, staring back at his second...this is just BEGGING someone to write a longer story based on that conclusion alone :D Great one shot, I enjoyed every bit of it, esp the Zutara goodness slipped in _ Gotta love those two!
| MaddAlice chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Wow, I really liked this. If Only it was longer...
| Leraiv Snape chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Is there a sequel to this? Cause if not...that's just plain mean...
It seems like a good start to something, working well with canon. I hope there's a follow-up to this somewhere...
| AlleluiaElizabeth chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Somehow I only just found this... lol
That last line really got to me. I think I need a sequel or another chapter where he actually *does* something about it. Or at least a pov from Katara going thru her kissing of Aang or something.
Still, this was a good fic. :) Very nice.
| sunshinepatch chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
And here's the tragic part of Zutara. D:
I loved it! 3