|Reviews for I am YuYan|
| kasplosion chapter 3 . 2/6/2009
Just as well written as the previous chapters. (: It's a wonder how you can come up with these epic characters. XD
| Shylandrew chapter 2 . 12/9/2008
it kind of reminds me of A Separate Peace by John Knowles...
each character has their own "war" to fight... a complex and deep backdrop that makes each story interesting... and a skill that draws them all together
but i have to say... there are a couple of typos in this chapter... nothing that makes it unreadable though... (although i shouldn't talk, but my reviews just happen to be all lower case... anywho)
keep writing i like this story
| Shylandrew chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
o my goodness...
i love this story.
the quotes between each section, it's planned out perfectly, the format makes perfect... and where you end makes the reader want to continue...
WRITE MORE PLEASE
also... how do you have the lines at the end of the "sections" in your story... i was pondering over that, but i never found out
| GalacticaCAG chapter 2 . 7/26/2008
I'mliking this. Itsnot often that you find an intriguing strory told from the perspective of the Fire Nation soldier. Keep up the good work and update ASAP!
| AvatarAiris chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
awesome idea ;)
so each of the others
will be getting their
own stories as well?
haha, i can't wait to
read them :) nice work
with Xi-Wang too! these
are awesome chaps ;D
keep it up!
| kasplosion chapter 2 . 7/23/2008
i like the Yu Yan archers too. they own. XD as for your story, i like it. it's like the truth behind all the blood of the war... if that makes any sense. :D it's very well written and i like the characters and format. will there be another chapter? *hopes so*
| tege chapter 2 . 7/23/2008
All through the TV show, the Fire Nation soldiers are always the Bad Guys. This chapter reminds us that, in their eyes, they are the heros and idealists.
Glad your muse is going strong. That means more stories, right? :)
| AvatarAiris chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
this is awesome ;D
i really love what
you've done to start
this fic ;) really
nice work with Sheng,
and awesome descriptions
as well, i cannot wait to
read more of this, plz
update again soon :)
| tege chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
There's always two sides to every war. Suffering has no nationality.
I like the Yu-Yans too. They're so perfect, you wonder how they got to where they are. Good description of the training regimen.
Looking forward to your next chapter whenever your muse strikes.