Reviews for Giving In
FireToTheRain06 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Great short story, just one ? What or who is Amm? I was a bit confused on that as it was mentioned twice.
ziva-tony-TIVA chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
please can you finsh this of as you has left at a good point but it needs to carry on
kalicious chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This is great. The only issue is that Ziva has brown eyes, not hazel.
fanfictionfan63 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Sweet little story, just loved it.
4kitty101 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
very cute!
USAFChief chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
I was looking for a short story of yours to read before I jumped headlong into one of the longer ones. This filled the bill and pulls me toward more of your work. Thanks for writing and posting this.
Lady aracne chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
ohh wow, that was awesome! I am glad you are back!
DarkArts27 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
that was awesome!

cant wait to read some more of your fics :)

cheers :)
crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
excellent short story. I love the descriptions of how they looked and of the kiss. Yummy! Sue
Princess456 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
cute :D
LadyTrish chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
aw...so cute!loved it:))
Nemisses chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
short and sweet ( or in my language lief en kort)
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Sweet little story.

I liked it!

And what a kiss!

PERFECT.