|Reviews for Giving In|
| FireToTheRain06 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Great short story, just one ? What or who is Amm? I was a bit confused on that as it was mentioned twice.
| ziva-tony-TIVA chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
please can you finsh this of as you has left at a good point but it needs to carry on
| kalicious chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This is great. The only issue is that Ziva has brown eyes, not hazel.
| fanfictionfan63 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Sweet little story, just loved it.
| 4kitty101 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
| USAFChief chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
I was looking for a short story of yours to read before I jumped headlong into one of the longer ones. This filled the bill and pulls me toward more of your work. Thanks for writing and posting this.
| Lady aracne chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
ohh wow, that was awesome! I am glad you are back!
| DarkArts27 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
that was awesome!
cant wait to read some more of your fics :)
| crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
excellent short story. I love the descriptions of how they looked and of the kiss. Yummy! Sue
| Princess456 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
| LadyTrish chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
aw...so cute!loved it:))
| Nemisses chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
short and sweet ( or in my language lief en kort)
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Sweet little story.
I liked it!
And what a kiss!