|Reviews for A Mary Sue Alphabet: Transformers Edition|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
I'm a little disappointed that you didn't include the biggest Mary Sue in TF history Causeway. But then again I doubt you'd be able to rate this as T if you'd do... XD
| Victorsmyname chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Lol all of these are so true! I've seen most of these in every fanfiction here. How do you avoid making a Mary Sue/Gary Stu?
| LW chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
I'm too lazyto log in... You seriously made my day with this. It was over with my grumpiness as soon as I reached the letter M. *Cries with laughter*
| Spoopy chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
Ha! Excellent! Really quite, QUITE amusing. I try my best to avoid Mary Sues, and yet I find myself recognizing a few tropes and plots, at least vaguely. This had me cringing and shaking my head the whole way down. A truly marvelous Sue shame fic. Kudos, buddy.
| LittleMewLugia chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
I was giggling all the way through this...this must have been fun to write!
| IMixDangerousChemicals chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
This is amazing
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Psst you forgot Causeway
| Dark and Chaotic chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I laughed so hard, especially at the letter V, as that's my sister's name. Oh lawdy! I hadn't even read the whole thing when I recited it to her, and I nearly had an aneurism laughing when I reached her name. Great job at this Mary Sure Alphabet :)
| Kalium Hydroxide chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
OMP OMP OMP! *squeals and giggles in delight* You have NO idea how much I loved this! Loved all the poems! And the writing and the Sue-bashing and... and... *rants on*
| Ersatz Writer chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Wow! This is just pure genius! I LOLed at every single one of them, and all the little stories which go with it too. I absolutely HATE OCs! Unless they just play as a little side-character or don't really star in the fanfic as the main character. The Transformers fandom never ceases to amaze me... -_- I have never seen a Fandom so swamped with OCs before...
| Lunar Mist chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
You are my hero. This poem totally made my day XD
| Teh Acorn chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
I really like this. I have trouble coming up with rhyming lines in my first language (Turkish) so I admire those who can do it in English.
Amongst these Sues are humans and Transformers alike. As much as some fans hate to admit it, the Transformers 'Verse is established in such a way that being human won't make a character a Sue on its own.
I agree with your points about Alexis. Some might disagree with you about her relationship with Starscream turning him into a less interesting character, though. I never watched Transformers Armada, so I don't know.
Elita-1, well, what little of her we see in the canon unfortunately suffices to make her a prime target for Suefication (pun not intended.) Still, I see her as a character with potential, for stories about what she and her squad do on Cyberton, or how her style of leadership differs from Optimus Prime's.
| JenEvan chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Really amusing one :)
As for the poems on Elita-1 and Alexis, i'm guessing that you're referring to the writers/fics that had turn them into Mary-Sues; something which I had the misfortune to have stumbled upon. Otherwise, Elita's quite a good match for Optimus, IMO.
The funniest paragraphs are for the R, the Y and the Z xD
| SaneFangirl chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Oh man, this was hilarious! I just couldn't stop laughing. I especially liked the part about how one of the Mary-Sues (I forget which) insulted Megatron and got off scott-free. What's up with that? And as for the "Alexis" poem, one of my major pet peeves are fics that involve Starscream behaving romantically toward ANY OCs, especially human ones. In conclusion, this was an awesome fic.
| the idiot chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I don't care if these had proper beat or whatever (I certainly couldn't tell, being an awful poet), I thought they were hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing after the second one. You really worked it, cop-sue or not. xD