Reviews for Another Brother
Heart of the Demons chapter 11 . 5/18
It's so nice of Team Avatar to get into some antics here before Kiyoshi Island becomes under siege. I'll surely keep reading.
Heart of the Demons chapter 10 . 5/18
You're right on the mark as usual with these amazing characters. They'll certainly have their hands full dealing with professional and personal issues. I enjoyed the presences of Suki and Iroh; they never feel tacked on and add as much depth to this story as possible.
Heart of the Demons chapter 9 . 5/17
Once again, Team Avatar shines. They're really growing as a team as the tale progresses.
Heart of the Demons chapter 8 . 5/17
Well, it looks like Aang and his bison friend Appa have been added to the mix. Let me tell you, the action throughout this chapter has captivated me very much. While this story is mainly from Zuko's viewpoint, the rest of the characters are given equal development, and you make sure that EVERYBODY has a chance to stand out.
Heart of the Demons chapter 7 . 5/17
Nice chapter focusing on Zuko and his adoptive siblings Katara and Sokka. They seem to get along perfectly throughout. The ending of this chapter strikes me as the most interesting because, having seen "Avatar: The Last Airbender," I know who's under the ice. :)
Heart of the Demons chapter 6 . 5/17
Zuko's a survivor. That's for sure. The way you get inside his head and what makes him tick is mostly why I love reading this AU-based fic.
Heart of the Demons chapter 5 . 5/16
Congratulations on Zuko earning a place in the Water Tribe family. It wasn't easy, but he got there. He'll face many more trials ahead of him, but at least he won't be doing it alone.
Heart of the Demons chapter 4 . 5/16
Things are "heating" up big time this chapter. I'm enjoying Zuko and Sokka's dynamic and how you portray it even as they head into the unknown.
KelseyAlicia chapter 11 . 5/16
More of a musical reviews for you and please say your gonna update soon its driving me up a wall.

Just to describe everyone who ever made up Team Avatar!

Outsiders"

Outside we're lonely but we are free
We're misfits, rebels, we're creeps and freaks
How come they've got it figured out
While we're lost, waiting to be found
Maybe we need something different now
For every broken bone and every lie you've told
Every time you're lost and you can't find home
This is for the ones who always feel alone

We are outsiders
Living inside a broken world
We are outsiders
And I know sometimes it can hurt
But it gets better yeah we'll make it through
We'll stay golden when we're black and blue
We are outsiders
But we're not hiding anymore
This is who we really are

Inside they talk about all their plans
Must be nice to have someone light your path
But inside their hearts are breaking
'Cause they don't know what they're missing
Outside we're lonely but we are free
For every broken bone and every lie you've told
Every time you're lost and you can't find home
This is for the ones who always feel alone

We are outsiders
Living inside a broken world
We are outsiders
And I know sometimes it can hurt
But it gets better yeah we'll make it through
We'll stay golden when we're black and blue
We are outsiders
But we're not hiding anymore
This is who we really are

For every broken bone and every lie you've told
Every time you're lost and you can't find home
This is for the ones who always feel alone

We are outsiders
Living inside a broken world
We are outsiders
And I know sometimes it can hurt
But it gets better yeah we'll make it through
We'll stay golden when we're black and blue
We are outsiders
But we're not hiding anymore
This is who we really are

And how how everyone is determied to save the the world, Zuko and also Aang still helps resuce everyone too and provides sancutray to one and all too.

You Rescued Me"

I was a travler travellin' alone
Crossin' that desert they call the unknown
Lost in a valley of shadows and sinking sand
Hopeless was circling over my head
Patiently waiting for my last step
I was a desperate womman in no man's land
Like an angel of mercy, emotional savior

You rescued me in the nick of time
I was right on the edge of goin' out of my mind
I was runnin' on empty down to a crawl
Facing a future with no one at all
And just before I found out
How life without love could be
You rescued me

The mind can play tricks when you're wanderin' out there
Making up visions out of thin air
That's why I thought I was dreamin' when you appeared
But your touch had feeling, your kisses were real
Your voice echoed like a song on a hill
Somehow you knew what my heart needed to hear
Like an angel of mercy, emotional savior
You took me in your arms and out of danger

You rescued me in the nick of time
I was right on the edge of goin' out of my mind
I was runnin' on empty down to a crawl
Facing a future with no one at all
And just before I found out
How life without love could be
You rescued me

You rescued me in the nick of time
I was right on the edge of goin' out of my mind
I was runnin' on empty down to a crawl
Facing a future with no one at all
And just before I found out
How life without love could be
You rescued me

You rescued me in the nick of time
I was right on the edge of goin' out of my mind
I was runnin' on empty down to a crawl
Facing a future with no one at all
And just before I found out
How life without love could be
You rescued me

Sanctuary"

What is this thing you do
Make me just tell the truth
Whenever I turn to you I surrender
Fears that I've tried to hide
And every old alibi
Now I see a source of light
Just within my reach

You are my sanctuary
My beacon in the night
You opened up your heart
You let me walk inside
When the world is turnin' crazy
I run to your embrace
Only you can save me
I've finally found a place
To lay down the load that I carry
You are my sanctuary

Don't know what brought us here
But one thing I know clear
I traveled a trali of tears to find you
Now when I'm on the brink
Down to my weakest link
And the weight makes me sink
Down to my knees

You are my sanctuary
My beacon in the night
You opened up your heart
You let me walk inside
When the world is turnin' crazy
I run to your embrace
Only you can save me
I've finally found a place
To lay down the load that I carry
You are my sanctuary

Now love seems so easy
You are my everything
So simple you touch me
My worries drift away

You are my sanctuary
My beacon in the night
You opened up your heart
You let me walk inside
When the world is turnin' crazy
I run to your embrace
Only you can save me
I've finally found a place
To lay down the load that I carry
You are my sanctuary

You are my sanctuary

and there is one power that is still stronger then even the avatar but will still help the avatar every time. As Avatar Yangchen said the Avatar is always human for without being human the Avatar wouldn't know or understand why human life is so percious and needs protecting or the world and all in it needs protecting.

And its the reason any of us fight each day against the impossible. For the Fire Nation lost its humanity when Sozin started the war by losing love.

But Zuko brought back love and even here he has love in his heart and it will still make a differece since unlike the rest of the Fire Nation he has a reason to fight and die. For Love.

I walk alone in a place unknown
My old home is far away
Though I tried hard to belong there
In that place I couldn’t stay
I played my role, the perfect queen I had to be
But there’s no place there for someone like me

Don't let your heart control your head
There are words that should be left unsaid
Conceal, don't feel, don't let them know
Well, now they know!

Let it show, let it show
Now my heart’s an open door
Let it show, let it show
I can’t hide it any more
I don't care
What they’ll say about me
Feel the strength of love
Emotion is the key to my liberty

I kept my feelings hidden
Contained by lock and key
Now at last the doors are open
And my heart has broken free
The mask has fallen from my face
My hopes and dreams I will embrace
There’s no one here to tell me ‘no.’
Here I go!

Let it show, let it show
I am free to laugh and cry
Let it show, let it show
To the past I’ll say goodbye
Forgive, forget
Move on, be free
Feel the strength of love

I feel emotion flooding through my every vein
My heart is heavy with the weight of all my fear and pain
I have to break away so I can learn and grow
I’ve been holding back too long
It’s time to let it go!

Let it show, Let it show
Hold my heart out in my hand
Let it show, Let it show
Spread my love across the land
With open eyes
A brighter world I see
Feel the strength of love!
Emotion is the key to my liberty

There comes a time,
When you face the toughest of fights,
Searching for a sign,
Lost in the darkest of nights,
The wind blows so cold,
You're standing alone,
Before the battle's begun,
But deep in your soul,
The future unfolds,
As bright as the rays of the sun.

You've got to believe,
In the power of love,
You've got to believe,
In the power of love,
The power of love.

Blazing emotion,
There's a light that glows from your heart,
It's a chain reaction,
And nothing will keep us apart,
Stand by my side,
There's nothing to hide,
Together we'll fight till the end,
Take hold of my hand,
And you'll understand,
What it truly means to be friends.

You've got to believe,
(you've got to believe)
In the power of love
You've got to believe,
(you've got to believe)
In the power of love,
It gives meaning to each moment,
It's what our hearts are all made of,
You've got to believe,
(you've got to believe)
In the power of love,
The power of love.

So that's all I can say with songs and what I feel towards your story.

Other then I hope you keep your promise and update sometime before this month is over! It's killing me and I'm sure all your fans both old and new and I just got my friend Phil hooked on your story! So please update soon!

enjoy your musical reviews!
KelseyAlicia chapter 10 . 5/16
I sent a friend your story and he got hooked too and I've been obeseivly rereading awaiting the day this month you'll updated but got more songs for your incredbile story that fit Zuko of this world. Which I'll break on the Kyoshi chapters which I didn't review on.

So here's half.

First Fire Nation theme song. This would so be their theme song particalry Azula's during the 100 year war!

the volcano glows red and everyone's dead not a body to be seen
a nation of ash and cinders and it looks like I'm the queen
The flames keep roaring like the furnace that's inside
Couldn't keep it in, hell only knows I've tried
Don't let them in don't let them see,
be the good girl you always have to be,
conceal don't feel, don't let them learn,
well now they've learned!
Let them burn, let them burn!
they're no longer my concern!
let them burn, let them burn!
Time to show the world it's my turn!
I wont care, how they're going to scream!
Let the fire rage on.
Flames never seemed to bother me.

It's funny how this inferno makes everything look bright
And the fear that once controlled me, set everything alight!
It's time to see what I can do,
to test the limits and break through.
No right, no wrong, when it's only me!
So i'm free!
Let them burn, let them burn!
See my fire across the sky!
Let them burn, let them burn!
Like a rocket I can fly!
I wont care, how they're going to scream!
Let the fire rage on.

My power surges through the air and all around.
My soul's the engine that will burn this world down to the ground!
And one move sparks ignition of my vengeful wrath!
I'm never going back, the future's all I have!
Let them burn, let them burn!
Raining down Armageddon,
Let them burn, let them burn!
Their precious world is gone!
I wont care, how they're going to scream!
Let the fire rage on.
Flames never seemed to bother me.

The next song which I do have on my Youtube like list is Zuko thinking how his past doesn't not determine who he is today.

Power
Was all I desired (I desired, all I desired)
But all that grew inside me
Was the darkness I acquired

When I began to fall
And I lost the path ahead
That's when your friendship found me
And it lifted me instead

Like a phoenix burning bright
In the sky
I'll show there's another side to me
You can't deny

I may not know what the future holds
But hear me when I say
That my past does not define me
'Cause my past is not today

Ambition
Is what I believed
Would be the only way
To set me free

But when it disappeared
And I found myself alone
That's when you came and got me
And it felt like I was home

Like a phoenix burning bright
In the sky
I'll show there's another side to me
You can't deny

I may not know what the future holds
But hear me when I say
That my past does not define me
'Cause my past is not today!

Those are the two songs been screaming most in my heads. The other songs? will be in the next chapter review.
Bopdawoo chapter 11 . 5/16
I LOVE THIS STORYYYYYYYY
Heart of the Demons chapter 3 . 5/16
Another chapter well done, my good friend. The characters are written exceptionally well, and their interactions feel natural. I'm loving how you're having Zuko adjust more to his new life. The firebending bit is the best part about this chapter for me.
Heart of the Demons chapter 2 . 5/16
Things are pretty much progressing for Zuko now that he's in an environment that's not his own. He'll have his struggles as he evolves, but somehow he'll find a way to overcome them. Well done on this installment, my good friend.
Heart of the Demons chapter 1 . 5/15
This is a story that certainly can reel you in by reading its first chapter. I enjoyed this chapter entirely. I'll make sure to read the rest of the story when I'm able to.
RippleInThePond chapter 28 . 5/15
This makes me angry. Gah! Hakoda is gonna be so angry! And Zuko! Poor Zuko! Should he regain his memories, he will learn that his father tried to have him EXECUTED, based on what we have been shown so far. Agh! And Azulon is dying. Ozai cannot be named Fire Lord unless there is proof that Azulon named him heir. There would be a whole hullabaloo.
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