Reviews for Another Brother |
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Sobatra chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 Absolutly loved the story, it is a great idea! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Pedroia the Destroya chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 OMG Wow! This was an awesome story! Try 2 update soon! |
Boz chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 Woah. DID YOU STEAL MY BRAIN! Cause I have had this same exact plot in my head for like, months but I'm not a writer. XD I'm glad someone who is a good writer is writing this. ) |
CrankedDemonslayer chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 OMG ! I love this! It is such a good idea, i've been playing around with a few zuko au story ideas, but yours tops them hands down. Please update as soon as you can ok? |
Super Davis chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 Interesting story. Zuko being a mute reminds me a lot of Link from the Legend of Zelda. It'll be interesting to see how the story plays out; as this is a very unusual story. Good grammatical and spelling use. Keep up the good work. - Super Davis |
cool chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 awesome cant wait for the next update whenever it is |
bloodstar chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 I really like this. It's a really good idea and very well written. Keep up the good work! Can't wai to read more. |
Bluetiger chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 A good start, your writing really draws me in to the story. :) I am a little concerned about Iroh, but, since this fic is set a little earlier than Zuko's canon banishment, I am hoping that he wasn't aboard that Fire Nation ship, and is instead off besieging Ba Sing Sae. As for different narative voices, well I guess you are going to have to sit me down and talk slowly to me, because I am afraid I don't really understand what you mean. But I know what I like, and I like this (even if does end up being Zutara). :D |
RTK chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 I love it . I absolutely love it. o.o the idea is so cute ! A small little helpless 9/10 year old Zuko. Adorable. (I'm going to read In His Shoes. You've got my interest spiked xD.) Update as soon as you can. I'll be waiting for more. xx. |
moxieweed chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 This is awesome! I am really, really looking forward to seeing how this story turns out! |
PaddysGal chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 Poor Zuko! Update soon! |
LorneStar chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 very cool! i can't wait to hear more on this story. saw avatar week (of course) and i'm sad it's all over :( so I'm counting on you to update lots! :D |
greengirl6 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 I like this. It has a ton of potential. I like Hakoda and I think Zuko's character is really nice. Maybe we'll be able to skip that whole whiny brat phase. Please update soon. |
fairmon10 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 This story sounds interesting. I'd love to see more of it! My only criticism is that Zuko seems less angry than he should be. He had a bad temper from a very young age. fairmon |
PastaSentient chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 This is good. Really good. It will be interesting to see what happens once zuko regains his memory. And how will his firebending affect teh story? Does he still know how to firebend? or will he have to regain his memory before he can? Anway, i hope you update soon because this is looking to be really good. Keep it up! |