Reviews for The Visit
fwcomic chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
I'm going to cry this is so beautiful

so lovely and FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLSSSS AAAAAAAAAAAA 3 I love this pairing so much and you represented it so sweetly here.
Nave chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
He should NOT be able to drive!

He can't see red on white can't see stop signs!
Ah-choo chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
"I'm a shadow of the man I one was"

That should be "once was"

"I love you Mia; I just you could have known how much,"

And I think there should have been a wish between "just" and "you".

Other than that, I really liked it. Nice setting for the fifth case.
Midnight-Moonlight-Gal chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Aww So sweet. Great job!