|Reviews for Ballad|
| Shay-na-na chapter 17 . 7/22/2010
on the day of the two- year anniversary since you started,
you give us this. this extraordinary, beautiful *cheesy*, fluffy chapter.
I squealed, teared and glared. It was AWESOME!
YAY YAY YAY YAY! _
| SunRise19 chapter 17 . 7/22/2010
Oh wow! Loved, loved this chapter! So sweet of Jester..so lovely!
However, my attention can't helped being turned towards Jane and Ava's condition..and well, treatment, from the other so called men. I don't know how dark you are or want to make this..but being as they are women in a camp of men the possibility of rape does enter my mind.(and, if I remember correctly Jester's nightmare about Jane..) I'm curious to see if Ava's character will be developed..and more importantly where is she?
If that is the case (and even if it is not), I am glad all the men got what they deserved!
I love this story, it is so very well written! Brilliant job!
| jedininjamellomaster chapter 16 . 7/21/2010
thank you! you have no clue how long I've waited for another update! your writing is just that good! keep on a-writin!
| Wolfchild87 chapter 16 . 7/21/2010
| Shay-na-na chapter 16 . 7/20/2010
YAY YAY YAY! You UPDATED! WOO HOO!
and jester found her. YAY! This is great. I am now in a very good mood.
poor jane, feeling he found her YAY!
thank you for such a beautiful chapter.
| SunRise19 chapter 16 . 7/20/2010
LOVED this! It was well worth the wait trust me! I'm also crazy about my writing times of stories..so believe me I understand what you're going through. I hope you can keep updating ASAP! This is wonderful! Awesomely written!
| Angel15Rocks chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
good job I really liked it lol :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
For the love of things good, UPDATE! Pretty please.
| she who watches and threatens chapter 5 . 7/10/2010
I love your story but I am slightly pissed off that you haven't updated in a while soooooooo this is gonna go one of two ways you update or *holds up frying pan* I go all desperate house wife on your butt so go to your computer and don't come back until you have chapter 16!
| Wolfchild87 chapter 6 . 6/4/2010
| When-life-gives-you-muffins chapter 15 . 5/8/2010
OMG WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME!
...I NO WHERE YOU LIVE...SO
UPDATE OR ELSE!
| Avenging Raven chapter 15 . 4/26/2010
I agree with the a great many other reviewers please keep it going. I am chomping at the bit to see if Jester rescues Jane or if Jane kicks his but at the same moment help arrives
| Lauraeffingiero chapter 15 . 4/2/2010
Awesome! I love it! I love the bit about memories of Jane calling to him from his past... I can absolutely picture that happening, and what they say is so perfect... I am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter, and the battle, and Jester finally getting Jane back - I swear I can barely wait any longer! PLEASE hurry with the next update! :D
| janefan13 chapter 15 . 4/2/2010
Cruelty! Please write! Write like the wind, for this is too good for you to not!
| Shay-na-na chapter 15 . 4/2/2010
Bravo! I for one am very proud of you for updating in such a short time *to me anyway*. Seeing as though I haven't updated mine in how many weeks or months.
this is a very good filler chapter. Nice job.
Love you dearie!