Reviews for Forbidden
ghost tale chapter 30 . 11/1/2014
is there a sequel to this story?
Dagger-Seishin chapter 30 . 5/16/2014
LOL i actually really liked this story. i was worried that he would be a bit brutal but he seemed to truly love hermione and harry ,especially when harry's heritage became known.
well done!
Alexa1993 chapter 30 . 9/22/2012
Love it! _
Montara chapter 30 . 9/8/2012
The ideas of Harry as Severus's son and his changed appearance were very interesting.

Thank you for sharing.
Emily chapter 30 . 5/29/2010
Please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeasse write a sequel. I LOVED this story amazing! I really hope that Severus will learn how to deal with a hormone crazed Hermione. Please if you do a birth scene do some research. I like birth scenes that are true to real life.

Thank You for writing this! :)
Stargatefan001 chapter 30 . 10/13/2009
Hey, awesome story.

Mrs.Vendetta chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
love it
LLevey chapter 30 . 7/20/2009
Love this story!

Liz :)
maria chapter 30 . 4/20/2009
please write a sequel ! im a huge fan and would like to see more development in the relathionship of severus as harry's father and how harry deals with the family he never had... and also a more detailed reaction of the wesleys and everybody else ... pl !
uptowngirl48 chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
interesting chapter! Just wanted to point out the 's: Hermione could only guess what had caused the extreme aggravation that radiated off of him as he exited the room and slammed the main door as he left
The Queen of Confusion chapter 30 . 1/18/2009
Great story!

Transylvanian chapter 30 . 9/28/2008
Good story.
Mare chapter 30 . 8/29/2008
I really enjoyed the whole story. You seemed to have ended it quite quickly. I would hve loved to see dialoge between Ginny and Harry about his change And a mention or explore of Dumbledore relation to Minerva. Very well written I enjoyed it!
nikkipotter2012 chapter 30 . 8/22/2008

Are you going to write a sequel (you should)

Any ways really really AWESOME!

Kris Fontiua chapter 14 . 8/6/2008
Hello and thank you for contributing your creative view to this universe. I just would like to ask on small thing could you please try and realize that you are writing a story and a few paragraphs do not dictate a chapter. Granted I am not asking them to be epic poems either, I feel as if your story would flow better if it was not chopped up so finely. I am enjoying your story but have just found it highly frustrating I enjoy the longer reads and and disappointed when the lack of proper editing is not applied and it appears as if you have just posted whenever you made any head way into your story without following a full thought to completion. I just ask that you review the length and general content of what a chapter is. Above all I wish for you to continue writing I enjoy your story's greatly.

Krystal Fontiua
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