|Reviews for The Second War|
| AvatarAiris chapter 4 . 7/25/2008
interesing new twist ;)
i really like how the
gaang now has the threat
of other's finding the
orb in the back of thier
heads now ;D very nice work,
nice touch as well adding in
their thought's at the end.
i can't wait to see what
happens in the desert ;P
| AvatarAiris chapter 3 . 7/24/2008
haha, nice start
for their new adventure ;)
hehehe, i love how Zuko
and Toph ended up in the
awesome work! keep it up :)
| AvatarAiris chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
interesting chap ;)
i really like that
the gaang is headed
off for a whole new
the orb ;D
haha, i can't wait
to read the next chap
| blue-skies94 chapter 2 . 7/23/2008
Wow...I like the story so far, it's very interesting. Keep updating!
| Kataang-or-Zutara chapter 2 . 7/23/2008
Yea, another quest! The plot is really good, and I can't wait until it thickens. Your details are great, and all of the characters are in-character. What Aang says in this story, I can hear him say in the TV Show. No offense, but Paku is spelled Pakku, and Kioshi is spelled Kyoshi. But other than that, your story is great!
| TheSunriseSets chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
So far, I am pleased.
You have a good plot idea, and the charcters so far seem in charcter, though I can't really say much to the fact it's the first chapter. I think you could have gone into more description-you pretty much rushed though everything, but I was still able to grasp the point. You have now spelling of grammar infractions that I noticed-thats a relief, LOL.
All-in-all, it's starting out good. At a little more description, and I think it could be even better! :-)
Keep on writin'
| SilverStella chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
| Freefallin77 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
hey that was a good chapter, and your idea is good. i only wonder if your going to use the pairing that were established during the show and the finale or use your own. if its a good story i wont care either way but some people will. you could try and avoid romance but that would be tricky
| AvatarAiris chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
interesting new fic ;D
i love how all of the
Gaang is headed to help
rebuild the Southern
Water Tribe ;)
haha, i can't wait to see
where you take this fic _
| TR16 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
i like this a lot so far. i like the nose pinching game. sounds fun but kind of painful if you get pinched too hard. _ keep up the great work and update soon!
| GlenWriter chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
This sounds good so far. Update soon.