|Reviews for First Impressions|
| stinkybunny chapter 2 . 7/26/2008
you channeled esme beautifully. why stop with jasper? you should do alice, also.
| rockgirl2011 chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
awesome job. )
| the-universe-is-insane chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I thought it was really good and you should continu (can't spell)
| Gotbooks93 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I just read this on and decided to see if I could cheat. Alas, there was no more chapters on either. Of course, you could change that *hint, hint, nidge,nudge,wink,wink* Really funny and well written, PLEASE update soon!
| cachstardust chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
This was great! Your writing captures all of their personalities so well, and the way they interact sounds exactly like I would picture them. I admire your Carlisle characterization, and I hope your future chapters are just as good!
| An LOTR Freak chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
you dont need to get any better this story is great! keep going!
| SomethingCuteandCreative chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I really like the direction this is going (obviously its the Twilight plot line) but you are a very talented writer and I think your doing a great job! I can't wait to read more!
| HorsecrazyJr chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Yes, you should continue! I never thought about this sort of story, so I'm curious to see how this turns out. Can't wait until the next chapter! I'm adding your story to my alerts.
| Katee1994 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Very good characterization. I feel you've gotten them all very well. Especially Carlisle.
Are you going to continue writing? There reactions to Bella, and such? I'd love to read more.
Very Alice-y, too. XD I love how she refuses to...comprimise with Carlisle, brilliant.
Can't wait for the next chapter if you write one.
| EdwardismyFav chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I look forward to reading more.
| stinkybunny chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
enjoyable read. you do carlisle's pov quite well. can't wait for the next chapter
| cem1818 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
ha i love how alice automaticly thinks of changing bellas clothes! UPDATE SOON! story is great so far!
| Angeliss chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I love it. Of course, I am pretty much in love with everything that you write, so it isn't a huge compliment, but I am very much liking this... I always wanted to see this scene with everyone else- the Cullens were so /careful/ that what they actually thought and felt was hidden behind their perfectly arranged reactions... This is exactly how I felt it would go.