Reviews for My Facade
xxXAsterRoseXxx chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Great POV for Mai. Nice angst bits...loved how you showed her getting ready for the day while putting on knifes and needles.

Shows a slight bit more deep side to Mai...I enjoyed it. Nice and short to. Good One-Shot.
ANessa Kedavra chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
This was so wonderful! You are very talented at writing Mai angst. I have built these walls true, and I know what Mai is feeling. Walls take a while to build, but an instant to fall. Well done!
Protecor Of Men Roy chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
interesting.
scamporeo chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
i love the wall thing...it's so true. She has all these walls up, and only people like Zuko and sometimes Ty Lee can get past them. Zuko pretty much smashed the walls when he left...
Li chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I like it! Mai angst!
Opaul chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
wonderful Maiko story.
pippa swan chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I really liked it, it captures what I would think Mai was feeling inside.
Julia451 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I think it was pretty great.
fababii chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
It sounds really nice, I like it. But maybe you could make it longer and had more depth and a lot more emotion to fully embrace Mai's feelings.