Reviews for Imperfections
Alexander 39 chapter 8 . 3/22
I utterly love this story. Excellent work.
One line is my absolute favourite: When Hinata says: "I don't want you or your,um, sperm near any other woman. It's mine.".
Gosh. How did you think that one. I almost died of laughter when I read it. It was brilliant.
Good job.
Alexander 39 chapter 11 . 3/18
Your story is VERY VERY nice butt ... Naruto Gay?
Absolutely NOT.
Apart from that I truly love all the SasuHina bits.
CeyaLater chapter 14 . 2/27
Ryuu would be the best.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/20
I think you should name the baby after the sister but just make it sound more boyish an make it sasukes suggestion so that hinata will be like realy happy over him thinking of something so sweet. That would be realy cool.
sophia chapter 14 . 12/24/2015
any name is alright and plsplsplspls continue you are so good at writing this kind of stuff.
i cant wait to read the next chapter :) :) :)
sophia chapter 6 . 12/24/2015
welll ummmmm you couldve done better but it was good
sophia chapter 5 . 12/24/2015
WOW...
WHAT A BIG TWIST IN THE STORY...
JUST EPIC!:):):):):)
sophia chapter 4 . 12/24/2015
nice chapter...okay that was an understatement...
SUPERB -as usual :)-
sophia chapter 3 . 12/24/2015
well evem though i dont like hanabi...
i still LOVED it :)
sophia chapter 2 . 12/24/2015
wordless again...
AWESOME!
sophia chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
wordless...
EPIC!
DUH BOMB chapter 14 . 11/9/2015
Wow Sakura went into total psychosis there. Sucks with the character deaths and I had to chuckle with the couple choices a smidge. Just how Hanabi found out about stuff. No one will ever know of Naruto/Gaara and Kiba/Shino... but update if you can. -your 300th reviewer
Diannenga chapter 14 . 11/1/2015
This is bloody awesome although it's been a while since you have updated it that's if your still into this stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
It was wonderful thank god there are writers like you in the internet.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/1/2015
I Love your fanfic
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