|Reviews for The Misuse of Alchemy Series|
| ThatbloodyTartarus chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
This series is sweet. Keep it up.
About your 'how does Ed transmute his automail'-question from chapter 6, I think I have an answer to that. Ed doesn't mess with the actual mechanics and electronics of his arm, he just extends and reshapes the outer steel shell into a sharp blade.
| SoRikuR0x chapter 8 . 3/20/2013
lol. that made me laugh so much! lolololol. XD
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 9 . 1/14/2013
Wow. Ed totes had no idea Al liked him. I like how it kind of came together at the end. Nice.
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 8 . 1/14/2013
Oh my gawd XD This was so disgustingly hilarious. Absolutely gross. Lol!
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 7 . 1/14/2013
Lol Ed is great...but he's gonna have a horrible 30 minutes some time later on...XD
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 6 . 1/14/2013
This was awesome. Winry is hilarious when she isn't swooning all over Ed in EdWin, and Roy goes with BDSM like Ouran goes with twincest. Lurve this.
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 5 . 1/14/2013
Ooohhh snap, an incest reference! I wither and die at the very notion! XD lolol that was weird and awesome and funny. Fantazic job.
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 4 . 1/13/2013
You're right, Wrath is totally asking to be lemonized. And I looove Envy, so this was awesome.
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 3 . 1/13/2013
I think I just woke up the whole house laughing. This was...oh my god XD just oh my god funny. Yes... XD
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Oh Ed XD ruining the moment...
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
DDDAAAYYYYUUUMMM that was awesome! But poor Al! XD (dayum)
| spinninground chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
Even though this is from so long ago, I couldn't resist reviewing the remaining chapters:
Ch. 5: Ohh, you meant FF's Marlboro. And here I was wondering if besides being a wonderful sex companion, you could also smoke the plant. I never, ever thought I'd say this about tentacle porn, but... that was sweet. It made me go d'awww and hope that those two could be happy together forever.
Ch. 6: One word: Nobelium! And god, Roy as a responsible, merciless dominant is all kinds of get-on-your-knees sexy. I might love you forever now.
Ch 8: Taking a shit combined with a Danny Boy reference? lol Wtf. I am extremely thankful that this didn't go into scat territory, but because of that, shouldn't it be in a non-erotic collection?
Ch.9: Leaving on this story might be one of the most depressing 'endings' for something that started with that much humor. I've got a pretty bad case of mood whiplash now, and I'm still sort of wondering why they're not having a threesome. I hope that you're still writing about something, somewhere.
| spinninground chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Oh fucking hell. What, that was ridiculous! In a good way. I definitely had to stop right before he actually transmuted his arm to facepalm at what was coming next. I cannot tell you how happy I am that there are nine more of these to read from someone who is apparently an absent genius. Care to remedy that adjective?
| anonymous baka chapter 6 . 6/8/2011
I'm pretty sure that all Ed alters when he transmutes his automail into a blade is the casing, not the machine itself.
| Neoxie chapter 3 . 5/2/2011
Just stumbled upon this story. I realize it's already quite old but I didn't want to miss the opportunity of expressing how amazing it is so far. Your writing really is impressive. The humor, the small details, the originality of each piece. Well, you probably already know this but I think you really should keep writing!