|Reviews for Paperback Romance Novels|
| Blah chapter 1 . 3/15
Pure genius. I think while reading this my heart broke and was put back together again.
| hellbunnyxxx chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
I loved this!
| DevilishBea chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Hohoho naughty naughty, but nice fic. Great job!
| Dior Crystal chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Short and sweet, I like it :D
| Spicy Diamond chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Lovely bittersweet read. I really like your characterzation of Haru and Gokudera and the whole flow of the story. Very soft, pretty, and almost surreal in its wording. Nicely done.
| Reborn-Chan chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
OMG,so sweet,I love this couple,they are like...they belong together..I have doses of GokuHaru pictures!
| Sweet Scrifice chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I really can see Gokudera saying all that stuff! I simple love it!
| shiawase chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
yay! gokuharu. It's a different perspective but I like it!
| Jewel Song chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Very well done! :)
Just a few things:
"She knows she can't help it no more" would should sound better if it was "She knows she can't help it anymore".
A correction here, too: "...when deep inside she's even more confused and insecure. should she be terrified or overjoyed.", would flow better if you put a period after 'insecure', and let that last part be "Should she be terrified, or overjoyed?"
Other than a few other grammatical errors, this was very well done. I highly enjoyed it! There really isn't much Reborn! het. fanfiction (or any, really), so I was really glad I found this! I look forward to more of your work! :)
| Miss Mousy chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Hmm...I was actually wondering when you will write something your ! This small ficlet is very well written and things are put quite interesting,but I'll agree with Angelic went a bit Oc on that sentence,but it was still very good! You have talent,so why not write more? -/
| Seravee chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I love it! Hope you will make more GOKUHARU stories! _
| o-parts chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
sjdghjkadghkas Oh my God this was wonderful! GokuDaru is my Het OTP and you pulled it off so well! I love you sweet, sweet author. Sob
| Chapppyy chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
i feel gokudera went OOC with this sentence
“I’ll compose a sonnets and tunes just for you, I’ll write you letters, and I know damned well that I can’t sing but I’ll sing for you. I’ll buy you jewels, frilly blue dresses and I’ll give you flowers. Lots of Red Camellia’s because I know you don’t like the white ones.”
| savethebirds chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
This is actually pretty good. Um, the grammer is a little...weird? (I'm not too hot myself, though.) And some sentences confuse me, but overall I really enjoyed the story. I hope you continue to write and I hope you'll get even better. :D
| Dean Gabriel chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
What the- I feel like crying now... oh well.. that was GOOD! Write MOAR for this couple!