Reviews for Darkness Falls Upon Us
Guest chapter 29 . 7/4
I hope you will continue the story. It's really a good story with a strong story-line.
StoneTheLoner chapter 4 . 6/16
Harry is kind of pathetic don't you think? When you make a Dark! character it's expected you'll try to differentiate him from his canon self, and yet here he is randomly being desperate for friendship. To the point that he would defy his normal behavior of not acting without benefit and befriending a completely random girl. He then betrays a request of the second friend so as to not loose the first random friendship he made(And why was it even bothering Blaise? It's not like they have an open and honest relationship or anything)... I could accept this if you had introduced him as being lonely, but no where at the start of this story did you hint that he wasn't completely fine with being the social pariah with no friends. In fact, that seemed to be his desired lifestyle with the way he avoided the other orphans, ignored the outgoing Hermione when he first met her, and straight up told Blaise when he first saw him that he wasn't interested in talking to anyone. In fact, those scenes are why I'm tossing around the word 'random' so often...
mavow1 chapter 29 . 2/28
Amazing story. Thats all i can say. Amazing.
DarkSolaris57 chapter 8 . 2/24
Why doesn't he just off the bird and get a new one? If a dog kept attacking you it would be put down. It may be semi-intelligent, but seriously would you just take it if your pet attacked you over and over.
cinhtay chapter 15 . 1/2
All the girls in your world are super-easy.
cinhtay chapter 14 . 1/2
No feelings, come on harry is 12, i mean, you make a playboy, at 12...
identity X chapter 7 . 12/30/2016
come o, 12 years old, in my country, at least, many people gets his/her first boyfriend-girlfriend... well at 12 also there are many teens pregnants thought, not as many as at 16 or 18... um, maybe it is best that they are nothing... but me at that age, a kiss was something, heck my first kiss was at 8, and it was something, we were boy and girls friends after that...
Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2016
awesomeeeeeeee no harry is like tom riddle jr
Guest chapter 29 . 5/18/2016
A good story and really interesting I hope you continue this soon as it seems a shame to end here just as its getting to the good parts.
aze chapter 29 . 5/15/2016
Its a good fic even if the fact that Harry fell to easy in love with Fleur is boring. I have the feeling that Harry only fell in love because she is pretty. She doesnt sound very clever since she was easily manipulateur by a Gryfondork.
Rootbeerman chapter 29 . 4/22/2016
Hope you can continue both stories soon I love them both and I wish you a good day.
Rootbeerman chapter 10 . 4/20/2016
Like the story so far but I hate how daph just left harry like that. I know that he wasnt upset and that they are young and its a hp/fd story but I like hp/dg just as much (love the other story btw) but to say you liked him, even if only a little, then to ditch him not long after for their other friend was a tad cruel in my opinion. Other then that I like the story so far I love dark harry stories and if you know any good ones let me know I can never seem to get enough of them.
Cynical0range chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
sigh. the wand ruined the story for me. i was willing to accept harry's cliche upbringing in an orphanage and how much it resembled tom riddle's but the wand became a bit too much. do you happen to have a dark!harry checklist?
Im a guest chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
...A neville Draco...and a Draco Neville personal I love it xD
Robert77833 chapter 29 . 11/27/2015
Are you ever going to continue this?
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