|Reviews for Family Matters|
| Halan Lore chapter 7 . 11/13/2008
Um... well this has really good potential. But you need to slow things down. Some of the characters are really AU and I bit of description would be nice. I'm just saying, not flaming.
| Sister Blood chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
I have read up to chapter five today and overall I like the idea, but there is one problem I have with it. You said Ren in Mayu's father but 8 years ago he was a kid. Mayu is 13 so 8 years ago her father lived at home with his parents. I would have made it someone else who attacked Ren as a kid and out of his hatred for them finds Lucy/Nyuu. But as i said that is the only problem I have with your story and I hope you finish it.