Reviews for Precision
Kyndsie chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Very lovely. Well-crafted.
UndergroundDaydreams chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Nice story. I like how you tied in your precision theme with love. Thanks for sharing! :)
Aysuh chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Wow, that was a cute story. :d I loved it!Good job!:D
Circe le Fey chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
This was really, really good, and you had a neat way of portraying Sarah, I've never come across any one writing her quite like that before. The best part was when you went through all of the reasons that she did and didn't like the Goblin King. The reasons that she liked him gave me shivers!
LadyVampyreMiya chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
lawl - i love it!

i love the effect of overusing 'precisely' in the story - it just makes it really.. awesome - for lack of a better word.


ghostdolly chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Aww... sweet. I enjoyed it a lot. Short, but with purpose!
a Fox and a Fawn chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I enjoyed this first chapter very much. ]

I like your writing style. It's not too complicated, but it's not simple either. It's truly like a narration. I also like the way she figured out her love for Jareth- the fact that it went against her nature.

Very excited for the next chapter.
Norehnka chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Nice oneshot! I read the book and i can easily see Sarah act and think like that about all the things in her life. The emphasize on the "like or not" made it perfectly clear and even though it was use quite a lot, it did'nt seemed out of place nor like it was being overused. great work!
notwritten chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
This story is interesting. Keep smiling. :-)