|Reviews for Finding Ursa|
| Sidster101243 chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
That was a wonderful story! thanks, I love this stuff.
| sidster chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
| Sidster chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
Wow, that was great! And the letter? You are amazing, keep it up!
| sidster chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
so far I jusr read number 1 ! good j o b! :D
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/21/2012
so will they meet ever?
| weasley-twins-41 chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
Oh please, please, update this! It's so fantastic! I really want to see what happens. The writing is so well done and everyone is very in character. Pleeeeeasssee! :)
| Angsty Anime Star chapter 5 . 10/9/2008
Wow interesting. Who is it. T.M. please continue. xD
| XMitsuki MoonX chapter 4 . 8/5/2008
update soon love story
| Pepipanda chapter 5 . 8/2/2008
Hm. I really can't figure out who this T.M. is. Oh and I was happy to see the Chinese. I have started learning it and I was able to read a few words in each sentence. That was fun!
| Pepipanda chapter 4 . 8/2/2008
Wow. A new direction here. I'm glad that they are getting help, but I wonder why she won't tell Zuko where his mom went. Probably to keep him from just running off to find her. Nice choice of song. I have been listening to lots of Don McLean lately. I really like his songs. Keep writing!
| Fireflower1315 chapter 5 . 8/1/2008
yay! i might *wink* hint* beEmber Island! Wait I think I know who T.M. is, is it Ta Min? Wow, that took me awhile to search my brain. I'm so excited! great job and
Keep writing (yes cheesy much)
| Peter Rabid chapter 4 . 7/29/2008
I love Don McLean! "Crossroads" is such a beautiful song.
I've got no idea who Sister Fatima is, and T.M. has left me confused. Hey, at least I got A.R. I really love clue hunts, there so exciting. I'm glad you're writing this fic, because I could only find one other like it, and the writing in that one was mediocre.
Please keep writing, can't wait for the next chapter!
| Fireflower1315 chapter 4 . 7/28/2008
is the place Ember Island?
| Pepipanda chapter 3 . 7/27/2008
So this *is* a clue hunt! Those are so much fun!(except, I guess, if you are really impatient to get to the end) I wonder what T.M. means... It doesn't remind me of any people or places that involve beaches... Wait, black sand. I think that means a volcanic beach. I just hope they know what T.M. means because I sure don't.
That's interesting that Zuko dreamed his mother's descent into the volcano. It makes sense though, since she would have access to the memory.
I liked how emotionally involved Zuko was with the letter and the whole hunt in general. I also noticed the lack of Ozai in the picture. Is that somehow symbolic of her not wanting his influence in the family?
Thanks for the update!
| Element Goddess chapter 3 . 7/26/2008
The story so far looks good. Ive been waiting for a "find zuko's mother" story. I'm impressed by your style of writing. It flows really well and is descriptive at the appropiate times. The only critique I have is that it seems to be moving slightly too fast. How long do you intend to make this fic?
Anyway... great start... keep going, can't wait to read more!