|Reviews for Six Words on a Sunny Afternoon|
| Rake1810 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Regardless of the ship you pick, i think you nailed how Ichigo would confess to anyone when he'd be about 19-20 (as i guess he'd be in the story).
| kissonthechic chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS THAT WAS SO SWEET
I must've squealed out-loud at her note...and how Ichigo was all "it's a pretty weak statement blahblahblah" I couldn't stop laughing because awww.
Your writing is perfect and I really hope that you start a full length story for me to devour.
| Animevy116 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
That... story... was... so... CUTE! I've never in my life read a story like this. For one thing, the literature around it is amazing. I would never imagine in my life that a series of 6 words could affect so much. Seriously though, I told me friends and they thought it was incredible too! To tell you the truth, THAT is deep stuff. Another thing is that the language is so vivid. I loved your choice in vocabulary. But most of all, the best thing about this story is their reactions. How they didn't act cheesy even if they might have just admitted their love for each other. So nonchalant about it even if they (might) be freaking out on the inside. I really did enjoy your story! You're an amazing writer! :)
| purplepam chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Aw! So very cute! I love it a lot! So Ichigo is in college but what is Rukia doing? I love that you did not make Ichigo a doctor which is way too common in most Ichiruki stories I have read! Great job!
| xBlu3-Appl3x chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Aww! So cute )
| sallythedestroyerofworlds23 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Great story! Using little writing prompts for them to express themselves was really cute and original! I totally squealed when I read Rukia's 'story'. Love this!
| yitiantulong chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Ohhhh... I'd forgotten how romantic "All your opinions are rejected" could be-
Thank you for reminding us and also for introducing me to Hemmingway's famous short story (with emphasis on short of course.) :)
Rukia's no slouch either in this story on writing. :)))
Very very clever... and romantic!
| ichirukitard chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
omg, this was so adorable and so so cute and sweet. it brought a BIG smile to my face. i don't know how you did it, but you've managed to write them in characters with those fluffiness without making it be OCC. Brilliant! this will go as one of my favorites. :)
| TruantPony chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Aah! So epic! Six words can say a lot. I like how there is so much subtext in between everything. It's really characteristic of Ichigo and Rukia. From top to bottom, this was a wonderful story, full of descriptive little details that stick in a reader's mind. Their interactions were well fleshed out. Great job! I hope you write another one like this again.
| iXheartXrecX75 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I love it! The six words at the end are so meaningful!
| Rukia chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Cute story! "I think I might love you".. :3
| shie0917 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
very sweet story XD
| GuessWho25 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
That's really cute. I think I may love you, definitely a start to a story
| LunaBianca chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
This is the first story of yours I came across, and I enjoyed it so much I linked to your profile and read all your stories in one go. Thanks for well-written prose, faithful characterizations and meaningful reflection/conversation.
I like that this future fic shows Ichigo NOT becoming a doctor. ;) Being a doctor could suit him, but it feels like the only option most stories present.
Love the six word stories you used. They tug on my heartstrings. And I can see Ichigo and Rukia having the story/not a story debate!
Thanks for keeping them in character with intense, earnest feelings that they work to restrain, at least physically. That's just the way they are and they have so much time to let things grow and shift.
| A Reader chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Yet another brilliant oneshot. This is nice, sweet, and simple (which is definitely what I needed after reading "The Cruel Intersection of Dream and Memory. Great, but dark).
I've always imagined Ichigo going into the liberal arts rather than becoming a doctor, and the way you fit his becoming a writer into the story was wonderful, because the story is about the beginning of a story and the symbolism of that is so beautiful.
And hey! It's brilliantly written IchiRuki fluff. What's not to like?