Reviews for Face Down
pamelacullen4ever chapter 14 . 1/8/2011
i liked it! is it complete!
Name rewrite chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
I think that well bellas feelig toward mike isn't... Clear I mean hello? He almost raped her? Then he comes to her again in a park and Edwards saves her and all she does is say "thanks"? I like the plot really but it's not real. Bellas and the characters emotions just arent real. Work on that and you'll have a very excellent fanfic
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
I think that well bellas feelings toward mike aren't... Clear I mean hello? He almost raped her? Then he comes to her again in a park and Edward saves her and all she does is say "thanks"? I like the plot really but it's not real. Bellas and the characters emotions just aren't real. Work on that and you'll have a very excellent fanfic
Name chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Wow I should really learn to read before posting, my apologies. Allow me to re-write my previous review:

I think that well bellas feelig toward mike isn't... Clear I mean hello? He almost raped her? Then he comes to her again in a park and Edwards saves her and all she does is say "thanks"? I like the plot really but it's not real. Bellas and the characters emotions just arent real. Work on that and you'll have a very excellent fanfic
Name chapter 14 . 12/28/2010
I think that well bellas feelig toward mike isn't... Clearbi mean hello? He almost raped her? Then he comes to her again in a park and Edwards Sara her and all she does is say "thanks"? I like the plot really but it's not real. Bellas and the characters emotions just sent real. Work on that and you'll have a very excellent fanfic.
Pedro-IS-Madi12 chapter 14 . 11/28/2010
yay for edward saving bella!
yesisalas chapter 14 . 9/13/2010
Fantastic story! Poor Bella.
MsWhiteChristmas chapter 14 . 5/6/2010
This is really good! You need to continue.
Twilighter29707 chapter 14 . 3/9/2010
GAH! you can't stop there my goodness my goodness are you trying to kill me? sorry drama queen moment...anyway i thinky you are absolutely AMAZING i really want to hear more of your writing. A couple of suggestions especailly on fanfic it gets hard to read long paragraphs and i know that it may be hard for the reader to go through it so maybe just split up that paragraph and also...well i guess there is no more so much for suggestionS huh? oh well your an amazing author keep it up! write more soon!
marsbareater12 chapter 14 . 2/4/2010
I like it. Um, I dont think you should do Charlies POV, but a EPOV would be good! :) IM not the best at doing different POVS myself/ Cehck out my story JacobRapeMessed up Bella. THanks in advance!
bexlex13 chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
This story is AWESOME! Please update.
pieisdabeesknees chapter 14 . 12/13/2009
I really Like this story! Please keep writing and update soon! :)
GreenEyes52 chapter 14 . 11/20/2009
You should defnitly do edwards and charlie's pov plz!and dont forget to update aswel plz.
paramoreftw chapter 4 . 10/3/2009
this is an awesome story:)
lgmrkm chapter 14 . 9/11/2009
I'm actually surprised Charlie didn't arrest Mike or at least give him a warning. I wouldn't mind a Edward POV.
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