Reviews for Balancing through life
StorySmith chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
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Kimco96 chapter 2 . 5/15/2011
So she fell asleep when some one put swords to her neck. Was she knocked out or something? Because I would be freaking out, but that's just me.

Also what exactly happened to put her in the hospile? You never said. I kind a assumed that it was some kind of head injury, but I am probuly wrong.

Was zuko there before or not? Because it was probuly him that is holding swords to her. Um you could work on the clarity of what's going on. Alot of the question that I have mostly have to do with things being unclear. I think it might be that you forget that the people who read your story don't know the little details already. I had that problem to until people pointed it out to me. It helps if you put the details they you may think that no one needs because some one might end up using it.

This story has some real potential keep going.