Reviews for When The Water's Not So Clear
sailor alpha tomboy chapter 2 . 10/8/2008
pease update
Rasberry Parfait chapter 2 . 8/10/2008
I really like this story. It's great. I've always thought of Leah as, if not a particularly likeable character, then an intriguing one.

And also, I am...pretty much obsessed with the title. I love it, for some reason I kept repeating in my head when I was swimming yesterday...

But anyway, I like it.
Perfect love kills all fear chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
I love this Leah, people always say she is a bitc* that don't care about anyone other than herself.

Can you make longer chapters?

Please continue with this story. I really want to see what happens next.

secondhandsmile chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I really like this, and the way you portray Leah. I also like how short the chapters are. Usually I'm kinda critical of really short chapters... they make me skeptical sometimes... but your's I really like. Rather than go on and on with a ton of melodramatic BS, it's concise, not mincing words, and it feels honest. Meh, idk, I just really like this.