Reviews for Green Eyes
Kyndsie chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
With or without the last paragraph, this story stands up quite well. Overall, I think I like it without, but that's probably just my mood at this moment. This is a good handling of the idea that Lynda / Linda wished Sarah away first.
Celecia Leigh chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
This so needs more. It makes it sound like this the the prologue for a story and not just a one shot.
notwritten chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
That was an interesting chapter. Have a good day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-) If you want to write more for this story, then go for it. In other words more please.