Hey tag non-cons please no censorship just some people struggle with these themes

Disgusting

You really have an amazing way of telling one-shot stories such as this one. I hope you keep on writing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. Thanks for the wonderful stories.

Loved the different layers of conflict. Beautifully realistic and deep. It was tortuous and captivating and tragic.

Antediluvian Poet

Damn.

That was beautifully upsetting

He that was soo cruel. . .

Wow. Just wow. You should definitely write more stories like this one, it's one of my favorites :)

You should make a sequel when they get together.

LOVED IT.

This story was, quite frankly, the most intense story I've ever read. It also happens to be my absolute favorite. (and I've read a lot) I was completely overtaken by Draco's psyche, and his inner turmoil. I found every moment to be completely believable and exactly right. This piece of work is a grand testament to the world of fanfiction, and I hope that you are as proud of your work as I was to be a part of it, and to be touched by it. I can only aspire to write as powerfully as you have. Bravo. I look forward to reading more of your work as the years go by. Really, beautifully done.

Lovely oneshot. The angst was believable and so was the horror. For some reason putting ourselves in the place of the girl is way too easy. Nice punishment or should I say burden? Well, she did push him too far and he was snooping and playing with others people's minds. It's both of their faults. While reading this, I have come to a conclusion also based on the many other lemons I have read. No author ever spares the victim once the first thrust is made. I also understand why they do so. They think it's already rape or really close to 3rd base so no point in cutting it off there, might as well finish it so the situation can be used for namesake or more. I agree with them to most extent, except for one. That no time does anyone use it for variety. I am not an author of lemons to do so myself. I really recommand the idea for others to use as something new.

wow

Beautifully sad. Very intriguing to see him read their minds and then the summary at the end- very nice.

that was really good. intense, creepy, sick, vile, but great. you really do know how to write. I did notice a few minor errors here and there, a lack of commas, etc. little things that hardly matter, but can sometimes be distracting when trying to read the work fluidly. you also may want to avoid the fragments, it's fine to have a few, but after the first paragraph it seemed that there were a little too many. i'd really like it if you posted another chapter. you also may want to decrease the complexity of some sentences, not exactly long sentences, but short simple ones that may be hard to understand. it may be more effective to make two sentences out of a short, complicated one. Sorry, this review is really long, but i wanted you to know that your work is really good, and i really want you to become better, because there's no where to go but up. Please right more, you're great. I hope you didn't hate this review too much. :/