Reviews for Better Man
Flvia chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Muito bom e forte!
Lola chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Wow, it's amazing!
Great description of Amon's thoughts. I'm really impressed! :D

And sorry for my English, but I'm from Poland.
uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
You've captured the inner struggle *cough*neurosis*cough* very well!

*favs*
AngelDustAddict chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Wow. I love this, mostly because it's abtsract, but not too ambiguous, and it sounds almost as if it comes straight from the heart. ]
Shadoe Dysteria chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Hell...

I love you for this.

This has always been one of my favorite stories, and, as creepy as it sounds, this and Anne Frank used to be my bed time stories.

And Naruto!

But, thank you for this...

I've always loved the Holocaust. WWII in general.

You did an amazing job.

This was him to a "T".

Thanks again.
Virtuous Vampire chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
I really enjoyed this. You portrayed Goeth very well. His inner struggle was captivating. There was one spelling mistake though. When he was walking down the stairs it should be 'creaked under his weight' instead of 'wait'.

Excellent otherwise!

Brat
Secono chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Beautiful. Truly one of the best pieces I've read on this site. I'll definitely look into your other works as well.
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
A great story. very good.
ready.aim.fire333 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
this is a tragic story that was extremely well written. i've always wondered about the man behind the mask, as it were, and i believe your insight of goethe is quite profound. what would their story had been like if they had met in a different time/place? you are gifted writer and i shall definitely read more of your work. great job.
JustCallMeMarly chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Wow. Powerful insight into a hateful, yet strangely & grotesquely sympathetic character. I was always intrigued by Goeth's portrayal in the movie and wondered at the depth of character that was given to him by Hollywood. Also makes me wonder a bit at what 'might have been' for someone that could be so torn like him if Hilter and Nazi Germany hadn't stepped in. Anyways, enough philosophy. Thanks for posting...
Strega Triss chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
This is a wonderful story. You've really captured something here.