Reviews for Little Moments
takerfan925 chapter 6 . 11/16/2010
Yhat he that sorry,low-down,no-account,I am trying yo keep my cool here an not throw something,excuse for a father,hmmmmphf,sperm-donor,doesn't deserve the appelation-father, abuse a child that way is WAY past that trio,behind bars,they wouldn't last five minutes,if that.
takerfan925 chapter 5 . 11/16/2010
Sammy needs to talk before it kills her,an let Mark,Scott an Kev go pound him an that Kent-person an that Reynolds person into MUSH,that even the worms won't eat!No wonder she stays inside an is so work-aholic-ish,its safe,the 'puter isn't gonna hurt her. Some men can be such tickturds.
takerfan925 chapter 4 . 11/16/2010
I love to eat fish. That being said,I agree with Sammy,I don't kill worms or fish.I know folks do it an that's fine,but for yours truly,nope,nope I don't kill fish,or ,bugs,those things,I can handle killing. Okay,Daddy Dearest is a coupled with the belt thing an that is WAY,WAY out of line,that is a definite NO-NO,in my off soapbox,now.
takerfan925 chapter 3 . 11/16/2010
I'm getting a vibe here,either,this Kent A-Hole person was a set-up,by Daddy Dearest,or he paid this Kent A-Hole person to leave Sammy alone. An he came back to mess with her mind;whichever him,I don't like, needs to be a tad more gentle with her,find rither Daddy Dearest or Kent A-Hole person an start whoopin' some butt.
takerfan925 chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
"Daddy must've really done a number on Sammy,for her to act like that,more than just verbal abuse,I'm he let somebody do the physical shtuff,while he either watched or ,I loved the convo at the ,that was so cute.
takerfan925 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Hokay,you want to tell me what happened to this baby for her to act like this? That way I know who to KILL and/or give a piece of my mind to. And Daddy's are to protect,not to run from,so what the damn Sam Hill did he do? You caught me in Mama Bear mode,here. An Callaway just best be nice to her or tell me the reason why not,PERIOD! I told you I was in Mama Bear mode. That baby has been hurt,I know she's grown an all,but something happened to make her hide from the world,what? Getting off soapbox now.
StraightLife116 chapter 19 . 8/11/2010
once again a total're an awesome writer.
BATISTA'S ANGEL chapter 19 . 10/16/2009
i love this story you would never think that mark would become such a big teddy bear lol
QueenofYourWorld chapter 19 . 8/31/2009
Great story i really love it. I was crying, laughing, and everything else in between. You are a really great author. The story was wonderful and touch me. Keep up the good work.


Legolas' Girl 31 chapter 19 . 8/19/2008
Awesome last 2 chapters. I loved this story. Keep up the great work.

tanya2byour21 chapter 19 . 8/13/2008
Oh I loved this story and I love how you ended it. Keep up the great writing. I have a request. I started a fanfiction/Original Site called Freedom Writers and I need memeber and I was wondering if you would join and post some of your Undertaker fanfcitions on there. If you are intrested in joining the link to the site is in my profile.

Audacious chapter 19 . 8/13/2008
nice ending! great story, can't wait to see what you come up with next! :) -audacious
bonnielynnmb chapter 19 . 8/13/2008
Well Done! Love the ending. Looking forward to read your next story...:)
XtremeMNCowgirl chapter 19 . 8/13/2008
Aw...what a sweet ending! You did such an exceptional job with this story. You were so articulate with your writing that you really gave it a breath of life.

Great job! I'm excited to read more of your work!
JenBourneXXX chapter 19 . 8/13/2008
OH! I loved loved it! They got Toby back and now they can be a real family, yay!

This really was great reading, don't ever stop!
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