Reviews for No Longer Responsible
The Dragon's Scribe chapter 8 . 6/7/2010
I loved the intensity and descriptoin you used when writing. I'm finding myself thoroughly enjoying this story. However, shorter paragraphs can help a reader. I find myself wanting to skip through a long paragraph, but I keep reading because I don't want to miss anything. Please continue writing, and please update soon.
TheAngelofFate chapter 8 . 5/29/2010
Damn leo is acting like a big FAT jerk! Urgh i hate it when he's like that!

Please update really soon! PLEASE!

This story is awesome!
kanah chapter 2 . 5/11/2010
awsome job defintly going to continue this read
PeanutButter13 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
very interesting :o
Urer chapter 8 . 4/2/2010
Hey, it's a shame that you seem to have given up on this story for the time being. :( It's really interesting and it's hard to guess what will happen next. With many stories, it's rather easy to anticipate what will happen next. Not so with this one! ;) I truly hope you finish this story, but in the mean time...thanks for the good read! :)
Urer chapter 3 . 4/1/2010
Wow! Great story! I really enjoy how well you've tied previous movies, current movies, and even some of the cartoon into your story. :) This is so enjoyable, and quite frankly, a genius work of art! :D I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters. :)
Strgrl4eva chapter 8 . 3/12/2010
What's going on with Leo? Why is Donnie acting so... so... for lack of better words, stupid? I would ask why Leo's pushing away his family but we all know this answer. So lets go another route. Are you a Leo hater? lol. He's my favorite character so while I would love this story even more if he was featured just a bit more its pretty wicked. And I hope you continue to update, their are too many great stories that never get finished being told.
Kim2Kim2Kim2 chapter 8 . 12/5/2009
Im begging you!

Please continue this story! Please!

It's a awesome FF! Love your writing!
Genbu chapter 8 . 8/18/2009
Holy cow..O.O'' had leo snapped?

Was that really him?

Or...something/someone else?

o this is too good!
somesortofthing chapter 6 . 5/4/2009
Ow...
chezakat chapter 8 . 3/10/2009
omg this is great! keep going! poor mikey and donnie. more please.
Tink17 chapter 8 . 3/7/2009
Yippee! ::claps:: Update!

I love the introspective thinking on Donnie's part, and how you used the humans' conversation to help steer Donnie towards what he needed to do next. Very, very good. ;D
i'MoKyOu'ReOk chapter 8 . 3/6/2009
I love it. Although, I was beginning to wonder if it would come back. Awesome job.
gypsywriter135 chapter 8 . 3/6/2009
...

Now I don't know what to think...

More please!
Simone Robinson chapter 8 . 3/6/2009
omg, so awesome!1 Please update this asap, like today! lol, jk but please please please soon, so preferably today, hehe.
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