Reviews for No Longer Responsible
X-XNotavaibleX-x chapter 4 . 1/21/2009
Leo...why did you punch Donnie? and full of saddens me...
X-XNotavaibleX-x chapter 2 . 1/21/2009
O-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-h Leo dun brought down the thunder and he got burned! Go Donnie, Go Donnie, Go Donnie!

I just wish he could have kicked Leo's but some more...Donnie needs to get a stronger weapon...wood vs. steel is not a very fighting match...
X-XNotavaibleX-x chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Poor Donnie...he's right though Leo thinks he's the only responsible one but he's totally wrong!

I appreciate you Donnie!
lynzyb chapter 7 . 1/21/2009
Great chapter! Looking forward to future updates. :o)
bonez1925 chapter 7 . 1/21/2009
Dude, that was awesome. Mikey's right, the brothers always shut him out somehow. Maybe you should have him rise up to the occasion or something. And maybe make Don miss Mikey a lot cuz he's his lil brother and the only who understands him.

Yeah... I'm a Mikey fan.

Anyways, great job. Hopefully it doesn't take you a year for the
Puldoh chapter 7 . 1/21/2009
OH MY GOD, that was friggin brilliant! I loved it, please update as soon as you can. Man, I loved it, and MIKEY"S HURT! OH MAN! MORE MORE MORE

Please show how Mikey is, how hurt he is (bad i hope) LOL, and what not! Show like how they need Donnie!

MAN, more more
tebrighteyes chapter 6 . 11/20/2008
Wow I really love this! Poor Don and Mike, I really like their interactions and their characterization is so spot on. Leo’s being a bit vindictive but I have to admit this is a really interesting side to him. Umm the only thing I can say is to maybe separate the paragraphs a little bit more since you had a few really long ones, just so it’s easier to read. Anyway I can’t wait for the next chapter!
lynzyb chapter 6 . 11/19/2008
Just read the 6 chapters posted so far in one go - really enjoying the story! Hope you update soon. :o)
crystalbladedragon chapter 6 . 11/8/2008
aw, poor mikey! i relly want to know what happens next chap when mikey returns home...

please update soon!
Puldoh chapter 6 . 11/7/2008
OMFG, yuo SO gotta update like ASAP, pleae please please!

Zafiro Okami chapter 6 . 11/2/2008
I love how you tell this story, and I hope you keep writing soon. I'm a sucker for these kinds of stories, and this scene with Donnie and Mikey reall breaks my heart. It's kind of heart wrenching Donnie leaving Mikey like that, and I think I know what happened to Leo for him to go crazy. Update soon! I really like this story .
Starshinesoldier chapter 6 . 10/28/2008
great story! Love love love it! Hope you'll update again soon yes? :3
Alonein-Darkness7 chapter 6 . 10/21/2008
Oh this is such a brilliant tale and I've never seen any interpretation for Donnie do a better job! I adore this plot and the interaction you've done between the brothers. Can't wait for more!
i'MoKyOu'ReOk chapter 6 . 10/17/2008
Two thumbs way up! This is seriously some purty good schtuff, made me panic just to see that it was like three months that you updated. But, I guess awesome things come to those who wait... Hope you can update sooner! Seriously, there's a lot of potential for the greatest TMNT movie fic in the whole fanfic universe... Very special indeed. Something must've really gotten Leo fer him to just remember that incident and snap like that. It'd be so kool if Don got some secret apartment already stashed away fer use, but an adventure would be better...
Ozlex chapter 6 . 10/7/2008
Ah no, please tell me your not leaving it there because that would be a crime against the universe (and I'm not being dramatic). Loving this story outrageously and I really hope you continue the great work :D :D
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