Reviews for Fighting Another War |
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arlena.ferrell chapter 13 . 1/22 Yay, Harry’s got his wand back! |
arlena.ferrell chapter 9 . 1/21 I am expecting some accidental magic and it doesn’t happen, his magic is kinda useless, but this is still a really good fic. |
OcheanMyth chapter 12 . 9/17/2023 ...man Legolas has been acting like a creep. I really hope he gets his harassment behavior under control. Especially since Harry is a minor. |
Goliatth chapter 16 . 6/26/2023 Hi Right, then. First of all, I'd like you to know that I'm a fan of your latest story, which I'm desperate to see finished, "Strange Connection". Secondly, I want this review to be constructive and I hope it's not harsh. (English is not my native language). So. I'd say I got hooked on the first few chapters you edited, right up to four or five ? After that, it was like reading another story with a completely different Harry. The first few chapters were very coherent and the character progression was logical, or at least very fluid. After that, it was as if Harry had changed completely. The desire to go home comes out of nowhere, the sudden distance and a much more petulant tone than before. He declares himself interested in no one and very ignorant of romantic attraction in general, then later declares that he is bisexual and feels attracted to both sexes. Which becomes even more of a contraction when he suddenly says that he imagines himself starting a family with Ginny with children and especially not a man/self, but in the end he imagines himself dying against Voldemort and doing none of that. He loves this world immensely and misses nothing, then suddenly everything does. He takes pleasure in the fight, then five chapters later he doesn't know how to face it. It's very destabilising. I think that more than a lack of coherence, your rewriting of this story should have been done from scratch or not at all, because we can see that you changed Harry's characterisation between the time you wrote it and your desire to improve his beginning. But apart from that, it's very well written and your characters are very well characterised, I think (if you leave out Harry, who isn't very coherent). Some length sometimes or repetition, but overall, you are a good writer who should not despair. *cough cough* Sorry, I hope I wasn't a horrible person. I send you waves of encouragement if you ever decide to return to the world of fanfiction. All the best. |
NieFeiRou chapter 39 . 6/18/2022 that was the end?! good writing and great story tho |
WeisseHex chapter 39 . 4/20/2022 Aaand the end! Awesome story, really! |
WeisseHex chapter 37 . 4/20/2022 I'm just wondering how suddenly Harry has his wand back; after all, it was supposed to be broken. And I thought he was to KILL himself, why is he dying from being stabbed by Orcs? Confused here! |
WeisseHex chapter 35 . 4/20/2022 It's insane, all the shit that happens to Harry! When will it end? |
WeisseHex chapter 31 . 4/19/2022 Ha! The only thing to say about Legolas, is...what's not to like? He's freakin' flawless and sexy as sexy can possibly be! And Harry should just go with it...! |
WeisseHex chapter 27 . 4/19/2022 It seems to me that Harry has no idea that if he dies, he will not stay dead, as it is clear that Voldemort's soul will be taken, not his. And just how will the dilemma of his much shorter than Legolas' lifespan be solved? |
WeisseHex chapter 26 . 4/19/2022 Well, at least Harry's dragon defends him, no problem! |
WeisseHex chapter 24 . 4/19/2022 I was hoping that somehow little Marcus would be alive! Thank you! |
WeisseHex chapter 22 . 4/19/2022 That was so funny, Marcus explaining the act of Love to Harry! |
WeisseHex chapter 18 . 4/19/2022 Are you saying that Harry was SENT to Middle Earth by Voldemort BECAUSE Harry has a piece of 'his' soul in his scar and thinks he won't be able to be killed? |
WeisseHex chapter 17 . 4/19/2022 Regulus Black is the Blue Wizard? Now I've heard it all! Whew! |