|Reviews for Sempiternal Belligerence|
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/18
This was fantastic to read. I love your PC's and I hugely enjoyed reading how they viewe our beloved four. Thank you so much for sharing this!
| Emily chapter 22 . 4/9
Love, love, LOVE this story! Amazing writing and I really like the different POV's! I don't know if your finished or not with this story but I would love if it continued! Amazing work!
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/27
Its a pity you haven't updated this story! Its so sweet and - how do i say this.. while reading you don't notice that the time is flowing out the window i love that you describe situations out of different views and give every single character your love! :) the best thing is that you connect every story to a thriller(?) Thats so exciting! :D
I hope you do post another chapter!
Greetings frim Munich~
| Really Random Rambles chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
love pevensie bonding- cant wait to read
| cflat chapter 22 . 5/5/2015
Really great story! I like that each chapter has a different point of view from different creatures. Hope you'll keep updating this story.
| SusantheGentle chapter 22 . 2/17/2015
I know this was forever and a half ago, but this is such an amazing idea. I love it, and I would adore you forever if you got another chapter up. If you don't, it would be amazing if I could get permission to continue this storyline... The four of them through other people's lives. Thank you so much!
| Rolletti chapter 22 . 10/22/2014
I've gone back and re-read all 22 chapters. Loved them all as usual and the new ones I've missed as well. I'm glad you are continuing so we are not cheated of some good story telling.
| Eregnar chapter 22 . 5/12/2014
Kind of fun to see them acting like kids, squirming in their seats. They may be rulers, but they're still children (at least, I assume they are...) and have too much energy to sit still that long. I like Susan's victory. The looks I imagined on their faces...
| Calyn chapter 21 . 9/17/2013
JSYK, naiad and dryad are not spelled the same way.
| Eregnar chapter 21 . 9/17/2013
Well. I'm caught between "poor Adan" and "stupid Adan." Running off into what was pretty clearly a fight when he had no combat experience was not one of his brighter ideas. Then again, the first few paragraphs seem to imply that he has a lot of bone-headed ideas.
I'm rather fond of your little faun. Fun chapter. I'd still like to know what all this animosity is about... looking forward to the chapters to come. :)
| Lionheart Rising chapter 21 . 9/17/2013
Oh, poor, stupid Adan. Still though, it did demonstrate just how much the Four care about those in their kingdom, so you definitely did well capturing that.
All in all, very good.
| beth-is-rainpaint chapter 20 . 8/19/2013
I liked seeing Nysha again- she was one of my favorites among your earlier characters :) (Also, does Toman have a bit of a crush on her? I got that impression from the detail about how he kept thinking about her smile.)
| Lionheart Rising chapter 20 . 8/19/2013
I like that Edmund basically just said "Screw it!" and got the cordial. Honestly Peter, I think you're in 'dire circumstances'.
Very nicely done!
| Eregnar chapter 20 . 8/18/2013
I love Edmund and Peter being brothers. Overruling Peter's stupid no-cordial decision just seems like something he would do. As always, love having things shown from other peoples' point of view. It's fun and gives you practice working with a variety of characters :)
One thing: when you're talking about Nysha's dish full of blood, you say "the blood instead" when I think you meant inside.
| narniadreamer1 chapter 19 . 8/4/2013
I like how it's different each time, and one minute it's fluff then a little dark just like real life. Thanks for updating so quickly made my day :)