Reviews for Sorry!
jka1 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
This was funny and not what I expected lol, great job :)
AkumaStrife chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
haha, i like how they have fully functional conversations all while doing that XD

...and Cloud coming at the mention of sephiroth
Katana Black chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
:O What? Epic sex fail? How can this BE? XD I loved this story! Great job!
Lady Gunblade chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
How can you make something so cute and hot at the same time? HOW? Teach me! Haha, I love these two, and I love this fic. A definite fave ;)
SakuraHaruno64 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
lol that was funny and awesome i loved it
burned out from exhaustion chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
Adorable xD

I love how Sephiroth was woven into this... I laughed out loud at Cloud's reaction, hah.
Tekko chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
ROFL! This is both decidedly hilarious and deliciously hot at once! Zack failing at buttsex XD Oh dear bob you're so full of win *hearts*

~Tekko
kunf'you'z-ed chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
omg! they suck at sex! i never thought they would! that is so frikking hilarious! wow. well, bye!
rain-of-the-soul chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
yum yum yum yum yum... thats all i really has to say about that... i do like the grinding better than... th back door...lol it was good though!
1557757 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Haha! Cloud IS every Soldier's wet dream! XD

This fic was so cute and endearing... Ahaha! I luff Cloud and Zack.
Tokyo-Rose2006 chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
Aw, it's cute in a porn-ish sort of way. :)
Janara chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Lol, loved it, simply loved it! Are you going to write the scene where Zack asks the General for advice on technique? I hope so, if only to see the look on Sephioth's face, lol
123 chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
I am so glad you wrote this. As a gay man, I recently had my first sexual encounter, and it is NOT as easy as people see to think it is. Thankfully, my partner was experienced, so he guided me through it.

Another truly great fanfic from you that shows just how much talent you really have. Please, keep writing...
Besieged Infection chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Me read again and again and again and again... ME LOVE STORY! (goes, once again, to check out your other PWP one shot stories)
Akaiama chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Cute and funny. Congratulations, you win my heart!
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