Reviews for Odalisque
Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
Good first impression. XD

Still though, do women normally go googly eye when attractive men invade their personal space like that? Never mind that she's been having a dry spell for two years.. It makes it sound, I don't know, desperate? She gets enough attention from men without trying, so it doesn't really makes sense especially since I thought she was seeing too much red to actually notice how hot he is.
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
I love the answers she put on the questionnaire so far.. XD Maybe she should have listen to Hitsugaya and put in crazy people in there. XD
Mina chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
I'm still only around chapter 6 and I'm really already loving it to bits. I actually don't find Rukia and Ichigo OOC at all. Haha! I love this so much. You're an effing genius. 3
Myrolerian chapter 45 . 10/27/2013
I liked it. Not 2 fluffy where you wanted to turn away all the time but, not to mention the fact that I'm a fan of heated couples who like to banter one another and try to rile their partner up sexually. I'm a fan of smut so why the hell not? None of that over corny, over fucking annoying shit happened between them either where they are professing their undyling love towards one another while listening to music in the fucking rain either.

I liked how their characters entwined between this story and Canon. Especially with the cases of Momo, Hitsugaya, and later Aizen, then there is what happened between Rukia and Kaien, same with how Ichigo's mother died. It was just well scripted and you got the personalities down nicely.

I was a little disappointed though on three things straight up though...I know you talked about Ishin going up to the Misaki poster and Rukia saw it in his house but where was the scene of him with tears coming down his face as he grinds against it? I don't know, just seems like that has to be a scene somewhere but that's very minor.

Second, why didn't you even show him fight besides saying that Ichigo knew MMA, trained ever since a kid, and spared with Kempachi as he went crazy on him? I just think they it should have been brought out once in the story where Rukia actually saw Ichigo kicking ass, leaving her wet.

Thirdly and most of all, where the fuck was Chad? Ichigo and Chad are brothers that forged their bond by protecting one another with their bodies and their life. I just don't see why I didn't see Chad in the story, seriously, where the fuck was he? Did he go back to Mexico or did he become a security guard or a bouncer or something? Ichigo without Chad... seriously.

I still liked it though, was an enjoyable read. It wasn't cliche, let me follow Canon all day while we occationally bring out fingers together. Who knows, might even read it again in a year or something. Keep up the good work, I'm glad I decided to come back to the story.
XxXDreamlessXsoulXxX chapter 35 . 10/11/2013
this story is too good! I love it!
XxXDreamlessXsoulXxX chapter 14 . 10/10/2013
really great place to pause! I think that ichigo is kind of a bastard, and im on rukia's side. :/ but i love the story, mainly because rukia reminds me so much of myself. -.- and i actually have an ichigo in my life, though we do not like each other thank god. :D
FY chapter 45 . 10/9/2013
Omeganixtra chapter 30 . 10/7/2013
She is so gonna flip out!
Omeganixtra chapter 24 . 10/7/2013
Just deal with it Ichi. She's gonna get her way somehow
SILVIA chapter 45 . 10/4/2013
re-read it..sniff sniff
i love your stories
this was amazing
unlimited minds chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
I've got to say,wow! you're story is descriptive and well written I'm only two chapters in I already love it! keep up the good work Tituba3 I'll keep cheering ya on! :b
tg backslash chapter 46 . 9/21/2013
id like to say that this is easily by far the best work of fiction i have read on this site to date. keep up the amazing work.
Darkest Kurogetsu chapter 45 . 9/21/2013
I just... I just... I-I... I WILL NOT CRY DAMNIT! *Starts sobbing* This was one of /THE/ most best stories i have ever had to honor to read (Damn, who would've thought i'd find it on Fanfiction?) in my LIFE. I thank you ;A; and im.. im just... sad to see it end... *Sniff* DAMNIT WHY?! Atleast, its not one of those stories whom are just overly dragged out at the end for no damn reason or plot at all.

Although I have to confess something here or else it'll stay with me forever; I cant read lemons for some damn reason or another. Like, its not that I DON't like them, its just for some reason even in my HEAD im prudish. Sucks ass, right? Ohwell, i'll have to re-read this when this goes away xD

Again, I salute you ma'- im sorry, Miss. Tituba. You're as epic (Yes, truely epic. not how people today just fling it around) as FallenPharaoh on Deviantart. Its a shame it had to end. 10 out of 5 stars! To hell with the other way around!
Darkest Kurogetsu chapter 23 . 9/19/2013
Finally.. IM NOT ALONE WITH DISLIKING ORIHIME (yeah, disliking. People bitch when you say hate)

Then comes the obvious review: Sorry, I'm having technical difficulties coming up with the paragraph that describes how much I like your writing. *Cowers* don't kill me!

Although I understand if you try an attempt because for some reason or Another, I can't read lemons. I have no idea why, not that they bother me or anything; I'm just prunish xD
Adeletesdeletebdele chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
The is one of the most amazing fanfictions I've read. I thank you with all my heart for producing a work of art such as this.
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