Reviews for Odalisque |
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![]() ![]() I must say this is one of my favorite Ichiruki fanfics! Such a good story and the plot twists are suspenseful and exciting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was fucking beautiful. I swear I didn't cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it wrong that I totally expected the Momo's rape? I litterally saw it a mile away. |
![]() ![]() This is so beautiful and just... PERFECT! Its my favourite story ever! |
![]() ![]() This story is the best ever! And I've never read anything stories this long but it was worth it! I love that even if it's a Ichiruki romance story, you've also added an equally interesting office AU story with my favourite OTP and characters! Bless you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() momo nooo... That was all I was thinking whenever momo goes near aizen xD and woah! what kind of loser talks badly about other's stories in another website?! much be just a sore loser... ignore those a-holes. |
![]() ![]() I feel bad for maki maki tho... poor guy got shot down cuz he's a side character. |
![]() ![]() I cried reading this chapter... it was so emotional and even bittersweet... you wrote so well! |
![]() ![]() poor byakuya... getting shot liked that... I loved the interactions with everyone. |
![]() ![]() I couldn't stop laughing at the end! This went into so unexpected direction and I just... lol felt a bit bad for our player here! xD |
![]() ![]() I already love it! lol at rukia filling the questionnaire! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... it's well written but I don't think office romance is for me and neither of the two leads are very likeable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why didn't i read this earlier? I love this story, absolutely beautiful! I love how this wasn't just a simple office AU love story but there was a really well thought and backed up plot line. Amazing plot and characters! Like I said, I love the devious plot that happen behind everyone's back and the setbacks that just kills, along with the cute adorable moments shared and how Ichigo looked at Rukia like she is a goddess. I knew Aizen had something behind his back, similar to the back stabbing in the original plot. So evil but so charming! HAHA. I love that there are many characters includes in this (I mean, even Nemu is here WHAT?!) and more than one couple. Love the friendship that Rukia and Momo shared, the kind of bond that never breaks even after setbacks, the kind that lasts forever. It's just so comforting to see them like that. I love the jealousy plot happening, whether on Rukia's or Ichigo's side. Rukia sure can't be controlled totally, huh? And YAS love when the Kurosaki family comes into things, just so joyful and funny. I love how Renji was totally captivated by Tatsuki at the end. They're really similar to Ichigo and Rukia huh? The way Ichigo and Renji can't take their eyes off Rukia and Tatsuki, how the girls always have some way to get them under control, how Rukia ans Tatsuki are bold in their own ways. HEHE. Though after all that plot, I thought Rukia and Momo would stay with Byakuya, I mean, New York that's far alright. HAHA irrelevant question, ignore that. The wedding OMG this is perfect! And Momo is pregnant AWWW new president coming, make way! Thank you for posting this, it has given me so much joy that I feel depressed because I don't have any more amazing series to read after this. KEEP WRITING STAY INSPIRED really love this story, especially the way Ichigo proposed to Rukia HAHAHA Beverly would have been so shocked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD WHAT A GREAT PIECE OF WRITING THIS HAD BEEN THIS STUFF IS SO FREAKING GOOD I DON'T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO REVIEW Okay, actually I have some words for it What a wonderful journey this story had given me in just 3/4 days I'm reading them full non-stop (Yeah, I'm having a vacation so why not) This story has a thorough character development, at first, I'm slightly bored with the pace because it's a bit sluggish. But after we hit the checkpoint (for me, it's when they decided to have "fun" in the elevator for the first time), then it's really stimulating. I know it must had been hard for you to juggle between writing this piece of greatness and school time at the time of writing, so for that, I am totally in awe. Despite this story had ended for so long (8 years now), but I do wish you a great success for the future. Congratulations for your novel! I hope you become an amazing author and more people know and read about you. Once again, thank you for this great story. Definitely 10/10 |